[003]Mother's Day
Today is Mother's Day. I went home and celebrate with my family. I work in other city so I have to drive the car back to my hometown for four hours. I prefer to drive at the midnight because there are less cars in the highway.
We ate dinner outside to celebrate Mother's Day. We went to the Chinese restaurant nearby my home. We ordered some special meals and drank some beers. Everyone was happy. I felt if the time frozen at this moment, the happy time will keep forever. But the time clock is still wheeling and the sun still rises in the morning. I am a human and I still pursue this moment.
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Hello, I am not a native speaker but I have been studying English grammar for a while. Therefore, I hope you find my corrections convenient.
Today is Mother's Day. I went home and celebrated with my family. I was working in other city so I had to drive the car back to my hometown for another four hours. I prefer to drive at the midnight because there are less cars on the highway.
We were eating dinner outside as we were celebrating Mother's Day. We went to a Chinese restaurant nearby my home. We ordered some special meals and drank some beers. Everyone was happy. I knew that if the time froze at this moment, the happy time would keep forever.
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[003]Mother's Day
Today is Mother's Day. I went home and to celebrate (or: "went home and celebrated") with my family. I work in another city so I have to drive for four hours the car back to my hometown for four hours. I prefer to drive at the midnight because there are less cars on the highway.We ate dinner outside to celebrate Mother's Day. We went to the Chinese restaurant nearby my home. We ordered some special meals and drank some beers. Everyone was happy. I felt if the time frozen at in this moment, the this happy time will would last keep forever. But the time clock is still ticking wheeling and the sun still rises in the morning. I am a human and I still pursue this moment.
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