Friday's way home
As usualy on Friday, there are awful traffic jams on the way to my home.
I have to spend an additional hour of my life. I have to seat in the bus or in ny car and go slowly through the overcrowded road.
A lot of people want to escape from the big city. They are ready to spend hours for a piece of fresh air. It's a payment for a good air at my home, because I live in a small town not far from the big city.
Everything has a price.
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Hello Igor
Well done on writing an interesting text! I have some suggestions/corrections below. I wasn't completely sure what you meant by the last part, but put my interpretation in red. I hope it makes sense to you.
Good luck with your English!
Kind regards, Carolina
The journey home on Friday/Getting home on Friday
As usual on Friday, there are awful traffic jams on the way to my home.I have to spend an additional hour of my life travelling/I waste an hour of my life travelling. I have to sit on the bus or in my car and go slowly crawl (at a snail's pace*) along the busy road.
A lot of people want to escape from the big city. They are ready to spend hours for a piece of fresh air. It's a payment for a good air at my home, because I live in a small town not far from the big city. Living where I do, not far from the big city, is a small price to pay.
Everything has a price.
* this is a poetic way of saying very slowly.
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