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look at me, I am a reader! an article for you Look at me... I am a reader! Long time ago, I heard that " the readers are the leaders" and that has encouraged me to go inside (the) book's world. I started my reading trip by reading novels and short stories first. I used to say to my friend who is already advanced in reading that I don't get much benefits from reading and she explained to me a very interesting example. She said; " you know when you eat one piece of date and you feel it doesn't do anything to your hunger? Actually this one piece goes inside every part on/of your body and gives it a small benefit! You don't feel it but your parts do. The same with reading, you don't feel but that appears in your talking, thinking ,discussing, ...etc. later many people started carrying books and just taking photos of these books and spreading them on social media programs! As if they said :" look at me, I am a reader!" Reader with what? I don't deny that you don't get any benefits from the book you have read but at least do something better than wasting your time! if you want to be a leader just read with your mind, ask questions ,see the usage of the language and fly with your imagination to another world! then you will be the leader of your partners who are still spreading nonsense pictures just to trick others that they are real readers!

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look at me, I am a reader! an article for you

Look at me... I am a reader!

A long time ago, I heard that "the readers are the leaders" and that has encouraged me to go inside the book world*. I started my reading trip by reading novels and short stories first. I used to say to my friend who is already advanced in reading that I don't get many benefits** from reading and she explained to me a very interesting example. She said, "You know when you eat one piece of a date and you feel it doesn't do anything to your hunger? Actually this one piece goes inside every part of your body and gives it a small benefit! You don't feel it but your parts do. The same with reading, you don't feel it but that appears in your talking, thinking ,discussing, ...etc.***

Later many people started carrying books and just taking photos of these books and spreading them on social media programs! As if they said: "Look at me, I am a reader!" Reader with what? I don't deny that you don't get any benefits**** from the book you have read but at least do something better than wasting your time! if you want to be a leader just read with your mind, ask questions, see the usage of the language and fly with your imagination to another world! Then you will be the leader of your partners who are still spreading nonsense pictures just to trick others that they are real readers!

[* The phrase "the book world" means to become involved with reading books. If you were writing about entering into the stories that are in books then you could use: "that has encouraged me to go inside the worlds presented in books."

** Or: "I don't get much benefit from ..."

*** You are missing the ending quote for what your friend actually said. It is not obvious which of this text is the end of her quoted words so you need to add the ending quote where it belongs.

**** You are saying here that you agree that people don't get any benefits from the book they have read. Did you mean instead to say you agree they do get benefits? If so you must write: "I don't deny that you get befits from ..."]

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Good job Hajer so you are a leader.
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Nice. I like the analogy of the dates.
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very good thinks

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