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Concert tickets --for English practice Hi Jack,

Long time no see. How are you doing?

I would like to give you a ticket of Jay Chou concert. He is one of the most popular singers in Taiwan and will held a concert here in Beijing at 19:00 on July 6, 2018. His concert tickets were so hard to obtain that I stayed up several nights to check when they were available online again and again. I finally bought one ticket at the fifth day after the booking is open. The ticket is at the seat 3, row 3 on the first floor. The seat is perfect, close enough to watch and just in front of the stage.

However it is so pity that I have to go to Shanghai this afternoon for business trip. I couldn’t come back by this weekend. I remember you loved listening to his song when we were at university. I want to give you my ticket but wonder if you have time to the concert.

If you do, please contact me a.s.a.p. I will leave the ticket to my college and give you his contact. So you can meet him to get it.

Yours,

Richard

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Concert tickets --for English practice

Hi Jack,

Long time no see. How are you doing?

I would like to give you a ticket of to the Jay Chou concert. He is one of the most popular singers in Taiwan and will held hold a concert here in Beijing at 19:00 on July 6, 2018. His concert tickets were so hard to obtain that I stayed had to stay up several nights to check when they were available online again and again. I finally bought one ticket at on the fifth day after the booking is open opened. The ticket is at the seat 3, row 3 on the first floor. The seat is perfect, close enough to watch and just in front of the stage.

However it is so a pity that I have to go to Shanghai this afternoon for business trip. I couldn’t come back by this weekend. I remember you loved listening to his songs when we were at university. I want to give you my ticket but wonder if you have time to go the concert.

If you do, please contact me a.s.a.p. I will leave the ticket to my college with my colleague and give you his contact. So you can meet him to get it.

Yours,

Richard

Hi Rick,

Another very good piece of writing - wait until you see my HSK5 writing - you will run off screaming in frustration!

Cheers

Jacqueline

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