I'm writing an horror story in English, but I do no know if it is right. can you help me ? This is a true story. Although almost two years have passed since that creepy event, I can still remember everything about it very clear indeed. It all happened on January 20 Th, 2017. My friends and I were supposed to make a vacation trip from Alabama to Louisiana. It was a short car ride and we were happy. I thought we would run the whole pathway in less than a week, so some money would be saved if we did not stay in an inn near the highway. At the first 2 days, everything went right, but, as might be expected, everyone was beginning to get tired so, at the third day we decided to park our car on the shoulder of the road, near a non-inhabited forest. It was a beautiful day, very sunny. There were no clouds in the sky, just the endless blue. It was almost 17 P.M when we parked our car. We really wanted to walk through the forest. Exploring the woods is a common pastime, so we did that. I confess that, my friends and I lose our track of time as we were entering more and more deeply into the forest. Moreover, I realized that there was not a signal of life around us. The environment became greatly changed, it was crisp and gray, the sun had already gone and now I could not drive the thought that we were lost out of my mind. We discovered something unusual in the forest, an old wooden cabin, inhabited I thought, was there. It was freezing so we entered there. It was a very strange place. The old cabin was filled with old books and dust. On the wooden wall hung a frame, actually, a painting of an old man with a gun. What happened with this old man? I do not know. I did not know even if this place was safe to pass the night. My friends wanted to stay in the cabin, but I did not want to, I thought it was too dangerous because in some way we were all helpless and I had already heard some stories like that before, and the end was not good. I decided to let them, actually, I tried to convince them to stay away of that cabin and get the hell out of that strange, dreary place with me, but no one wanted to. I tried to find a way out of the forest by using my GPS. Almost 2 years have passed and my friends have disappeared since then. I do not know what happened to them. The police said me that everyone who goes to that area where the cabin is disappear in a mysterious way. Local people say that there is a diabolical creature inhabiting that forest. If you are reading this, please, stay away of that old cabin near to Bienville national forest.