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Step On A Dogshit
The This picture is taked taken of in xuhui riverside, Shanghai. Nowadays, many people like to raise dogs. This cause caused a problem that and now, dogshit is more common than before. Walking on the road, you have to be carefull careful about it. In our community, more and more people complain about this matter. They ask the people raising dogs to deal with the shits shit. I think it is important to do it for our enviroment.It is interesting that we have a saying about it---"If you step on a dogshit, go to buy a lottery right now," we call it luck of dogshit, means that you have a high opportunity to win the price. So we should love it, right?
Great job! You did very well. And by the way, in the text, I removed “a” when you said “a dogshit” because in English, we classify dogpoop as plural, not singular. So it’s “dogshit” not “a dogshit.”
Step On A Pile of Dog Shit
The picture is of in the xuhui riverside in Shanghai. Nowadays, many people like to raise dogs. This causes a problem in that there is more dog shit is more than before. Walking on the road, you have to be carefull careful about it. In our community, more and more people complain about this matter issue. They ask the people raising dogs to deal with the shits take care of their own dog's poop. I think it is important for our enviroment environment to do it so.It is interesting that we have a saying about it---"If you step on a dogshit, go to buy a lottery right now". We call it the luck of dogshit which means that you have a high opportunity to win the price prize. So we should love it, right?
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The original was very understandable. As Andrea noted, "dog poop" is more commonly said than "dog shit" in the context of what you wrote. However, even more common is "a pile of dog shit", at least where I live.
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