A little about my hobbies - Part 1 (Could you correct me?)
The first thing that I like to do every day is waking up early and get preparations to have a productive day. In my free time I like to run, read books and develop new abilities every months. Actually, I don't have so much time to hang out with my friends between monday and friday, but they make me feel happy when I'm with them over the weekends.
I've been learning programming language like Java, artificial intelligence and PHP. I like to learn about new technologies and I try to be a better person day by day, after all I think we need to improve ourselves and we need to learn as much as possible in our life.
I decided to start studying English 2 years ago when I didn't have no idea about: "what's the better way to study languages?", and because that I was improving too slow. But now, I know what I can do to improve better and faster. I like to learn English and by the end of the next year I will learn Japanese. Until there I'm going to practice English every single day while I keep improving my listening and speaking skills.
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A little about my hobbies - Part 1 (Could you correct me?)
The first thing that I like to do every day is wake up early and get preparations to have prepare for a productive day. In my free time I like to run, read books and develop new abilities every month. Actually, I don't have so (very) much time to hang out with my friends between Monday and Friday (you can also say "during the week" or "on weekdays"), but they make me feel happy when I'm with them over the weekends.I've been learning programming languages like Java, artificial intelligence and PHP. I like to learn about new technologies and I try to be a better person day by day. After all, I think we need to improve ourselves and we need to learn as much as possible in our lives.
I decided to start studying English 2 (two) years ago when I didn't have no any idea about: "what's the better way to study languages?" how to study languages, and because of that I was improving too slowly. (or "wasn't improving fast enough") But now, I know what I can do to improve better and faster. I like to learn English and by the end of the next year I will learn Japanese. Until there I'm going to practice English every single day while I keep improving my listening and speaking skills.
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