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The article states that the science of archaelogy has gotten into trouble in UK,however,the lecturer disagrees with it based on the new guide line.
First of all,unlike the situation described in the passage,the archaeological examination in the site must be proceed before the constraction start.If the archaeologists find some valuable archaelogy intersts here,there will be someone make a plan to preserve and document these precious stuff befor the constraction.
Second,according to the new guide line,the exspenditure for the initial archaelogy examination and enactment of the plan would be paid by the constraction company,so the relatively adequate financial support will allow the researcher do more deep investigation to discover more interesting information about our ancestors.
Last,there will be more paid positions available for the public in all stages of the archaeology process,including for initial examination,plan making and report wrting.Thus,more and more people will be able to devote into this career,and it will have a promising furture.
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tofel:comprison writing
The article states that the science of archaelogy has gotten into trouble in the UK, however,the lecturer disagrees with it based on the new guide lines.First of all, unlike the situation described in the passage, the archaeological examination in the site must be proceed before the constraction starts. If the archaeologists finds some valuable archaelogy interests here, there will be someone making a plan to preserve and document these precious stuff items before the construction.
Second, according to the new guide lines, the exspenditure for the initial archaelogy examination and enactment of the plan would be paid by the construction company, so the relatively adequate financial support will allow the researcher do more a deeper investigation to discover more interesting information about our ancestors.
Lastly, there will be more paid positions available for the public in all stages of the archaeology process, including for initial examination, plan making and report writing. Thus, more and more people will be able to devote themselves into this career, and it will have a more promising furture.
Just watch your spacing after full stops and commas. Also watch your spelling.
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