My artworks
This is my drawing — Martin and the Modulin.
I didn't post it in wednesday because I simply did not dare. On the first glance, people used to see a sniper or Star Wars... And only on a closer look — a Musician. But I never associated Martin and his instruments with weaponry. Now and back then I only saw a musician and his instrument. That's why I signed the drawing.
The two lessons I took from this whole situation:
1. No matter how beautiful are the shining display and LEDs on the Modulin, the overall impression from the picture is more important.
2. A drawing made with soft pencil and gouache should never be ironed! It doesn't exist anymore. Only this image left.
This drawing has a history. I love it.
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My artworks
This is my drawing — Martin and the Modulin.I didn't post it in on Wednesday because I simply did not dare to. On the At first glance, people are used to seeing a sniper or Star Wars. And (<--Although there is no rule against it, it's best not to start English sentences with conjunctions.) Only on by taking a closer look do they see a musician. But However, I never associated Martin and his instruments with weaponry. Now and back then In both the past and present, (<--This sounds better.) I only saw a musician and his instrument. That's why I signed the drawing.
The two lessons I took from this whole situation:
1. No matter how beautiful are the shining display and LEDs on the Modulin are, the overall impression from the picture is more important.
2. A drawing made with soft pencil and gouache should never be ironed! It doesn't exist anymore. Only this image is left.
This drawing has a history. I love it!
Hi, Alyona! I'm not familiar with this drawing or understand art as deeply as you might, so I only corrected some mechanical issues and basic language usage. Perhaps someone else who's more knowledgeable about art can help you if necessary. I hope this helps!
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