An informal letter
Dear Jim,
Thanks a lot for your letter. I'm really excited you're going to spend a whole week with me!
We normally have classes in August. I go to school in the morning, so I have free time in the afternoon. I always take a nap when get home from school and then do my homework.
When you're here, though, I won't take naps. I want to spend as much time with you as possible.
I want you to visit the city, so I've rented an apartment in a lovely area in the middle of the city. It's not so far from home, so we can go there in the afternoons. We can visit the shopping malls and the restaurants. We can also go to the coffee shops. I love coffee! Do you like it?
The temperature here changes all the time in August. It is not too cold, but it is not hot, either. You should bring some warm clothes and one or two jackets would be ideal for when it rains because when that happens, the temperature suddenly drops.
That's all for now. I'll see you in the airport on the 23rd.
Best wishes
Leila.
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An informal letter
Dear Jim,Thanks a lot for your letter. I'm really excited that you're going to spend a whole week with me!
We normally have classes in August. I go to school in the morning, so I have free time in the afternoon. I always take a nap when I get home from school and then do my homework.
When you're here, though, I won't take naps. I want to spend as much time with you as possible.
I want you to visit the city, so I've rented an apartment in a lovely area in the middle of the city. It's not so far from home, so we can go there in the afternoons. We can visit the shopping malls and the restaurants. We can also go to the coffee shops. I love coffee! Do you like it?
The temperature here changes all the time in August. It is not too cold, but it is not hot, either. You should bring some warm clothes and one or two jackets would be ideal for when it rains because when that happens(I would change this to "when it does," Your grammar is correct but it sounds awkward and not how typical native English speakers speak._, the temperature suddenly drops.
That's all for now. I'll see you in at the airport on the 23rd.
Best wishes
Leila.
Nicely written. You are gifted in writing grammatically correct and conversational style letters. "In the airport" is grammatically correct but "at the airport" is more commonly used. I think that speaking English more would help to fine tune your writing. You clearly have a developed inner voice that provides a strong link between how you write and how you speak.
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