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Friends Friends are a blessing we should praise God for. We meet a lot of people daily.We talk and set with hem,but that not mean we are a friend! We can call that person my friend if he really is my friend. But how?? If the person cares about you and your details and khows how to draw the smile on your face as you know your features if you are okay or not,we can say that your friend.Your friends also carries your grief and keeps your secret.For example, I have 100 friends, I cherish 70, I speak with 20, I love 10, I get confused with 5, and one remains completely different from them. I know my secrets and know secrets. I know the details of his day. He knows my daily details. I don’t know how I can describe the friend because the letters can not describe our feelings towards them.

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Friends

Friends are a blessing we should praise God for. We meet a lot of people daily. We talk and sit with them, but that does not mean we are a friends! We can call that person a friend if they really are my friend. But how?? If the person cares about you, and your details and knows how to draw the smile on your face, as they know your features and if you are okay or not. We can say that that is your friend. Your friends also carry your grief and keeps your secrets. For example, I have 100 friends, I cherish 70, I speak with 20, I love 10, I get confused with 5, and one remains completely different from the rest. I know my secrets and they know my secrets. I know the details of their day. They knows my daily details. I don’t know how I can describe my friends because these words can not describe our feelings towards them.


Please note that I changed a lot of words simply because of the tense and context in which you began your sentence. It's not to necessarily say that they were wrong :) The black is where you made errors, the yellow is more for accuracy :) Hope this helps. 

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Friends

Friends are a the blessings we should praise God for. We meet a lot of people daily.We talk and set (I don't get this) with them,but that does not mean that we are a friends! We can call that person my friend if he really is my friend. But how?? If the person cares about you and your details and khows knows how to draw the smile on your face as you know your features if you are okay or not,we can say that they are your friend.Your friends also carries your grief away and keeps your secret.For example, I have 100 friends, I cherish 70, I speak with 20, I love 10, I get confused with 5, and one remains completely different from them. I know my secrets and know secrets. I know the details of his day. He knows my daily details. I don’t know how I can describe the friend because the letters can not describe our feelings towards them.


Well written, keep it up! :)

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If I tell you then how will it be a secret ???
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So what are your secrets?

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