speaking with machines
Hello my firends,
my profession is software engineer. Therefore I am able to speak a couple of programming languages. You certainly can imagine that machines are propably the best listeners. They will not have any prejudices and they are most often responding quite friendly. Admittedly, I have to tell them how to behave. And when I am not talking clearly, they can be quite naughty. so I have to choose my words very carefully.
When I was young my parents did the same. They told me things again and again until I processed the algorythms.
It worked pretty good until some evil viruses found vulnerabilities in my system. But my parents were pretty smart. These hackers did´t have any chance. The installed firewall was working and updated every day while a cozy dinner at my parents home. They even invited by time all the viruses to learn how they can patch my system in the best way.
What I have learned from that strategy is, that you can´t avoid attackers to run your systems. But you can protect your children by understanding the attackers. I thank my parents for this lessons and hope I can help some programmers with this lines to develope some smart software as well.
best regards,
Nino :)
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Hey Nino, here's a re-write of your piece if you're interested. There's very little 'wrong' with the grammar, but as you've gone for an extended metephor there's a lot of scope for changes which could bring you closer to idiomatic english - feel free to ask me about the choices I've made.
With the expcetion of the once marked sentene everything you've written is comprehensible (and cute!) I'm not suggesting you can internalise all of these details at this point in your learning, just that you might like to read your ideas expressed by a native speaker so that you can direct your study/learning accordingly.
great work, Emma
Communicating with Technology (or Machines, though we tend to use machines for industrialised units and tehcnology for computers)
Hey everyone,As a professional software enginer I know a couple of programming languages. As I'm sure you can imagine, some people in my line of work think that computers are the best listeners; they are universally friendly and without predjudice. Sure, we have to tell them exactly how to behave and when we give them faulty input they can be fractious and unpredictable, but if I chose my words careful then obey my every command!
To some extent this is also true of human interaction. For example, my parents were very judicious about the 'input' they gave as a child and they repeated it persistently until I'd processed their algorythms correctly. Their approach worked pretty well and I was 'bug-free' until some dangerous viruses uncovered vulnerabilities my system. Even then my parents were pretty smart - those hackers didn´t stand a chance: The installed firewall was fully-functioning and updated every day over a cozy dinner in my parents home. [They even invited by time all the viruses to learn how they can patch my system in the best way. I don't follow the sense of the metaphore here? sorry ]
What I have learned from that strategy is that though you can´t avoid attack, you can protect your children by understanding the attackers. I thank my parents for this lessons and hope that I can help some programmers to develop some smart software as well.
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speaking with machines
Hello my firends,My profession is software engineer. Therefore I am able to speak write a couple of programming languages. You certainly can imagine that machines are propably the best listeners. They will not have any prejudices and they are most often responding quite friendly. Admittedly, I have to tell them how to behave. And when I am not talking clearly, they can be quite naughty. so I have to choose my words very carefully.
When I was young my parents did the same. They told me things again and again until I processed the algorythms.
It worked pretty good until some evil viruses found vulnerabilities in my system. But my parents were pretty smart. These hackers did´t have any chance. The installed firewall was working and updated every day while a cozy dinner at my parents home. They even invited by time all the viruses to learn how they can patch my system in the best way.
What I have learned from that strategy is, that you can´t avoid attackers to run your systems. But you can protect your children by understanding the attackers. I thank my parents for this lessons and hope I can help some programmers with this lines to develope some smart software as well.
best regards,
Nino :)
There is only one English language grammar correction, that I have made. You write programmers you do not speak them (in a few years time maybe you will). I have not attempted to check your essay as if I were a teacher, It reads very well to me, because I understand it is normal in the Computer, software and I.T field to refer to computers and software talking to each other. And to use natural language methods to explain things, to think of the machines actually being as human as possible. This approach was what gave us the technology we have today and may provide us with being able to speak to a machine (without the machine having a software program in between). Maybe robots will be born with a clean brain, and they learn like humans, is it already happening?.
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