the last day of June
it feel good to see all these feedbacks after back home,i was never expected that this little casual words would be noticed by u all,i would say thank u to everything u did 2 me,i really do.
it has been years i never sat down & wrote sth about myself,sometimes share the own minds with others just like am standing in front of the crowd naked,cuz am a strong girl with a sensitive heart.....at least i looked strong....uh am go to far,well,it may not that bad,at least am still with clothes on.
ok,i have a question,which is i've never been haning on website of this kind,do i need to correct the last composition which has been corrected,if i take one of the ideas as final,will it be an offense?or i just leave this composition alone?
btw,hopefully this composition would better than the former one....
bye everyone,have a sweet dream....
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Hi Yoyo, I made some corrections for you
In English you should capitalize the first letter of a sentence. Also "I" is capitalized. Each sentence should have one subject, one main verb and end in a period. Also you need to put a space after period and comma.
In answer to your question I would say that most people just leave it alone and do not write a final version, also most people will not be offended if you choose one correction to be better than another.
我觉得你写英文写得越来越好。
The last day of June
It has been years since i
Okay, I have a question.
BTW, hopefully this composition
Bye everyone,have a sweet dream....
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the last day of June
it feel good to see all these feedbacks after back home,i was never expected that this little casual words would be noticed by u all,i would say thank u to everything u did 2 me,i really do.it has been years i never sat down & wrote sth about myself,sometimes share the own minds with others just like am standing in front of the crowd naked,cuz am a strong girl with a sensitive heart.....at least i looked strong....uh am go to far,well,it may not that bad,at least am still with clothes on.
ok,i have a question,which is i've never been haning on website of this kind,do i need to correct the last composition which has been corrected,if i take one of the ideas as final,will it be an offense?or i just leave it alone?
btw,hopefully this composition would better than the former one....
bye everyone,have a sweet dream....
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