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A little novel There is a boy whose eyes are blind. he never saw his girlfriend.but she still love the boy.till one day ,the girl was checked out she had a bad cancer.and her last wish is donate her cornea to her boyfriend.finally,the first thing after the boy see the light is to see his girlfriend 's photo.but the photo is blank! but a sentence on the photo:Please don't look for my photo anymore. the new girlfriend you meet next is me! sometimes we can;t notice the great of woman!

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A little Novella

There is was this blind a boy whose eyes are blind1. He never saw his girlfriend but she still loves the boy him .till Then one day, the girl was diagnosed with  checked out she had a bad cancer and her last wish is to donate her cornea to her boyfriend. Finally, when first thing after the boy regained his eyesight,  see the light is he wanted to see look at his girlfriend 's photo.  but However there was no the photo is blank in the photo frame ! but just a message.  It said, sentence on the photo: "Please don't look for my photos anymore.  The new girlfriend you meet next is me!"

 


sometimes we can;t notice the great of woman! Such is the greatness of true love!

Good story!  There is a movie made in the 40s starring Cary Grant where there was an couple made ugly by accidents.  Everyone saw them as crippled etc.  However in their eyes, he was handsome and she was like a goddess living in a beautiful life with each other.

You need to leave a space after every comma, 2 spaces after a full stop.

1.   Blind means eyes cannot see.  So this is redundant.

 

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More of a short story than a novel. Sweet story.

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