Tell about a time when you lost something. - Writing Challenge, Day 4
I lost my keys in my apartment last year. It was a chain of three keys, two metal keys for my bedroom and one plastic card key for the apartment's front gate.
At a noon, after having lunch, I went back to my apartment to have a snap. If I remember correctly, I put the keys on the desk just after I entered the bedroom. Then I laid down on the bed and fell asleep shortly. I didn't know how long before I noticed there were some clicking and clinking noises. I couldn't tell whether they were from my dream or the outside world because at that moment it was a total blur of my mind. Half an hour later, I woke up feeling energetic and was going to the library. But I could not find my keys. They were not on the desk, not on the hook stuck on the wall, not on the dinner table and not at any other corners I had searched. Then I realized that it could be my cat who hide the keys. She was always like playing keys, and hide stuff she was fond of. And the noises were certainly made by her playing them. Unfortunately, there was still no trace of the keys in the places she usually stored her treasure. So I had to stay at home until my roommate was back, and took his keys to reproduce new keys.
Until now, there is nowhere I can find the keys. It is just like there was a small black hole appearing occasionally in my bedroom swallowed them. Maybe they will pop out in the future.
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Tell about a time when you lost something. - Writing Challenge, Day 4
I lost my keys in my apartment last year. It was a chain of (or "ring of" depending whether you put it in a ring or chain) three keys, two metal keys for my bedroom (or just "room") and one plastic card key card for the apartment's front gate.At a noon that day, (just to make it clearer) after having lunch, I went back to my apartment to have a snap nap (snap has different meaning). If I remembered correctly, I put the keys on the desk just after I entered the bedroom. Then I laid down on the bed and fell asleep shortly after that. I didn't don't know how long before I noticed there were some clicking and clinking noises. I couldn't tell whether they were from my dream or from the world outside world because at that moment, it was a total blur of in my mind .
Half an hour later, I woke up feeling energetic (or refreshed) and was going to the library. But I could not find my keys. They were not on the desk, not on the hook stuck on the wall, not on the dinner table and not at any other corners I had searched. Then I realized that it could be my cat who hid e the keys. She was always like playing with the keys, and hiding stuff she was fond of. And the noises were certainly sounded like they were made by her playing them (because you were not sure). Unfortunately, there was still no trace of the keys in the places where she usually stores d her treasure. So I had to stay at home until my roommate was back, and took his keys to reproduce new keys (its good but repetitive of the word "key". Another way "until my roommate came back. I then used his keys to make a duplicate for myself").
Until now, there is nowhere I can find the keys the keys are nowhere to be found. It is was just like there was a small black hole that appeared ing occasionally in my bedroom and swallowed them (because sometimes this sentence is talking about a specific incident last year and sometimes it is talking about ongoing black holes. You must be consistent, so I changed it to a specific incident last year) . Maybe they will pop out (or "show up") in the future.
Your English is good, you wrote very well. Some of my corrections are not really necessary but just suggestions only if you want to see other alternatives.
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