The Old fashioned values may seem out of date but actually, they are the most fundamental thing s which we need in this age. For example, when we meet someone for the first time, it is important for us to act as politely as we can because the first impression is extremely essential important, no matter whom you have a conversation with. More importantly, it seems that these deep values can be hidden and only be seen appear when we begin to do something stuff, especially like when the teamwork starts. In other words, our behaviour can imply  portrays (or shows) who we are, what qualities we have and ultimately, whether we are a worthy person or not. (very good :) )

Once we form cultivate these great values, the impacts could would  be marvellous (could means maybe or maybe not). It seems like social status and wealth gain more popularity nowadays, which proudly implies people's value. are sadly gaining more and more importance in peoples minds these days at the expense of traditional values . However, if one a person only has much abundance of money without any qualIty moral values and qualities , it is impossible for him or her (remove brackets around her) to achieve the final ultimate success. In other words, if we have the basic values and we act as who we are, then people around us will ultimately see the results and give us the rewards. who we really are and treat us back in kind. ("in kind" means they will treat us the same way as we treat them) A recent study discovered that people tend to accept the suggestion from a young person who is full of kindness and trust. 

In conclusion, these old fashioned values should still form an essential part of our lives. are still basic and are part of people's I feel it is worthy of judgement because these values are so in need in these times and they can reshape ourselves and affect our lives.

You wrote very well again Serena. Hope this is helpful to you.

IELTS WRITING TASK 2

(question) 

As requested, I'll try to explain the question first.
- social status : refers to how a person is viewed within a community. Things like their work/ profession, income, family background, who they socialise with, whether they live in a wealthy area, house, car ...

- material possessions : the things they own like luxury cars, branded clothes, jewellery etc

question says it seems social status and material possessions appear to be more important to people now then good old fashioned values like honor, kindness, trust etc. Do you agree or disagree and to what extent ?

(answer)

It seems that a person's worth is mainly judged by social status and wealth nowadays and the old fashioned values such as honor, generosity, and trust are out of fashion not important anymore. This essay (strongly/completely) disagrees with this statement because the old fashioned values are definitely fundamental and the impacts of them are marvellous (or "are of utmost importance").  (They asked to what extent you agree/ disagree so better if you specify to what extent like strongly/ completely/ slightly disagree)