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Daily routine I wake up around 6 'O clock then. I freshen up after that I go to the gym. I come back 8pm sharp afterwords I take a bath with worm water afterwords I get dressed in meanwhile I have a cup of tea afterwords I read a book to Improve my English for half an hour afterwards I get prepare for my office then I catch a bus to reach office in the afternoon around 2 O clock I have my luch with my clegue in office canteen usually at 4:30 I have a cup of tee during my duty time then 6:30pm I leave for my home and 8 pm I take my meal with my family afterwards I watch an episode between 9to10 pm then usually go to bed without spending time on social media.

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My Daily Routine

I wake up at around 6 o'clock.  I freshen up.  After that I go to the gym. I come back at 8pm sharp.  I have a warm bath and afterword get dressed.  Meanwhile my water for my tea is boiling.  Then I  drink my tea whilst reading a book to improve my english.  I read for approximately half an hour.  

Then it is time to get prepared to go to my office.  I have to catch a bus to reach my office by 2 pm.

My colleagues and I eat lunch at our office canteen.  Usually around 4:30pm I have another cup of tea during my duty time.    I leave for my home at 6.30pm.   My family and I will eat dinner at 8 pm.  I  will relax by our TV and watch an episode of a favourite TV serial  before heading to bed.   I try not to spend time on social media.  so I will go to bed at around 10pm. That is the end of my busy day.

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Daily routine

 First,I wake up around 6 'O clock .second, I freshen up after that I go to the gym. I come back 8 pm sharp afterwords I take a Worm bath. with worm water .

 I get dressed in mean while I. had a cup of tea later, study English that improve it.  a book to Improve my English
For half an hour  prepare for my office So,I catch a bus to reach office in the afternoon around 2 O clock. I have my luch with my clegue in office canteen usually at 4:30 I have a cup of tee during my duty time. Then, 6:30pm I leave for my home and 8 pm I take my meal with my family afterwards I watch an episode between 9 to1o pm. At the end, I usually go to bed without spending time on social media.*

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Well done Aasif. It is not easy writing about your daily routine. So I have swapped some of the sentences around so that they are not saying the same thing over and over again. I like your use of "meanwhile". Keep up the good work!

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