Please, help me. Are there any mistakes in the text?
Yekaterinburg
Russia
1.04.2019
Dear Tom,
Thanks a lot for your letter. Sorry I haven't answered earlier but I was really busy with my school. In your letter you asked me about recording of family history. I personally think it's important. It seems to me that younger in family should do it because they are more able to pass on history from generation to generation and they know how to do it better. It can be done by recording videos and making photoalbums.
By the way, tell me about your mum. What's her name? How old is she? What flowers does she like?
Well, I'd better go now as I have to do my homework. Take care and keep in touch!
Lots of love,
Tanya
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Please, help me. Are there any mistakes in the text?
YekaterinburgRussia
1.04.2019
Dear Tom,
Thanks a lot for your letter. Sorry I haven't answered earlier but I was really busy with my school. In your letter you asked me about recording of a person's family history. I personally think it's important. It seems to me that a younger person in the family should do it because they are more able to pass on history from generation to generation and they know how to do it better. It can be done by recording videos and making photoalbums. photo albums.
By the way, tell me about your mum. What's her name? How old is she? What kinds of flowers does she like?
Well, I'd better go now as I have to do my homework. Take care and keep in touch!
Lots of love,
Tanya
Note: I think it is better to collect history from the old people in the family, they have more history to tell! Maybe you are saying that the younger people are better with the technology, for recording and photographing the old people!
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