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Aydn R
Hi everyone I would like to mention about my daily routine, I usually go to our clinic 5 days a week, I work from at 10.00 am to 6.00 pm. I examine and operate my patients. My two patients cancelled their appointments in the morning, but they informed us 15 minutes before their appointments. I don’t like that. Because they are being unfair and don’t respect us and our other patients.
21 ago 2024 09:23
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I would like to mention my daily routine. I usually go to our clinic five days a week. I work from 10:00 AM to 6:00 PM. I examine and operate on my patients. My two patients canceled their appointments in the morning, but they informed us 15 minutes before their appointments. I do not like that because they are being unfair and do not respect us and our other patients.
Your description of your daily routine is clear and informative. It is great that you shared specific details about your work hours and patient interactions. To enhance your writing, consider avoiding contractions and ensuring proper capitalization and punctuation. Keep up the excellent work!
22 agosto 2024
Hi everyone I would like to mention about my daily routine, I usually go to our clinic 5 days a week, I work from at 10.00 am to 6.00 pm. I examine and operate my patients. My two patients cancelled their appointments in the morning, but they informed us 15 minutes before their appointments. I don’t like that. Because they are being unfair and don’t respect us and our other patients.
Help! I did not cross out that sentence. And I don't know how to edit my reply. So, please ignore the line through the sentence!
21 agosto 2024
Hi everyone I would like to mention about (talk about >>> mention is too casual here, and does not need a preposition. You could use it though. People do. "I'd just like to mention that my patients keep cancelling!" Actually, that not very casual, is it! It sounds rather annoyed. Anyway, the important point is> talk about or mention >>> not mention about. Same thing with discuss>> talk about or discuss>> not discuss about)) my daily routine, (you need more than a comma here) I usually go to our clinic 5 days a week, (again, more than a comma please. Full stop, or possibly a semicolon?) I work from at 10.00 am to 6.00 pm. I examine and operate my patients. operate ON my patients (if it is actually surgery) My two patients cancelled their appointments in the morning, but they informed us 15 minutes before their appointments. (I'd say... ONLY 15 minutes before... for emphasis) I don’t like that. Because they are being unfair and don’t respect us and our other patients. (I don't like the full stop and the word 'because' over in the next sentence. I prefer, I don't like that because.... (no punctuation) or I don't like that. They are being unfair.... (no because!) What do you think?
21 agosto 2024
Hi everyone, I would like to talk about my daily routine. I usually go to our clinic 5 days a week. I work from at 10.00 am to 6.00 pm. I examine and operate on my patients. My two patients cancelled their appointments in the morning, but they informed us 15 minutes before their appointments. I don’t like that because they are being unfair and don’t respect us and our other patients.
Hi. Mention means referring to something briefly without going into much detail. Example: I did not mention the matter to him.
21 agosto 2024
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