Dear Sara,
How are you? I want to talk to you about something important about our business. There's a problem we are must fix it as soon as possible. Could you come to my house, or we can go to any café to talk if you want.
Recommend for me a quiet place you prefer to talk in it.
Do you think you can come on Sunday morning to me this week? Send me an answer this evening please if you can't come.
Regards,
My name.

Correct my writing please 🙏🏻

Question

Dear Sara, 
How are you? I want to talk to you about something important about our business. There's a problem we are must fix it as soon as possible. Could you come to my house, or we can go to any café to talk if you want.
Recommend for me a quiet place you prefer to talk in it.
Do you think you can come on Sunday morning to me this week? Send me an answer this evening please if you can't come.
Regards,
My name.

Correct my writing please 🙏🏻

Answer

Dear Sara, 
How are you? I want to talk to you about something important regarding our business.

There's a problem we must fix as soon as possible. Could you come to my house?  Or we can go to any café to talk if you want.
Recommend a quiet place where you'd prefer to talk.

Do you think you can come on Sunday morning this week? Send me an answer this evening please if you can't come.

Regards,
My name.

Correct my writing please 🙏🏻

All I did was change a word, some forms, and delete some unnecessary words.  Great job, though!

Answer

1. There's a problem that we must fix as soon as possible.   
2. Could you come to my house?  Otherwise, we can go...   
3. Please recommend me a...   
4. Let me know if you can't.

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