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Naramon Soimukda
An essay - please give me some feedbacks and correct my text, thanks a lots
The Introduction Paragraph:
Firstly, what types of person is the one’s, that you want to provide the gift. Nowadays many people are interested to talk about diverse types of presents to each other, which means it might be difficult to argue their opinions in public. The categories of presents like luxuries or homemade items is hardly to definite, which of these categories is best to be given.
1 nov 2020 19:34
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Introduction Paragraph:
Firstly, what type of person is he whom you want to give a gift. Nowadays, many people are interested to talk about
diverse types of presents to exchange with each other, which means that it might be difficult to discuss their opinions in public. The categories of presents like luxuries or
homemade items are hardly to define that which of these categories is the best to be
given.
I think you need to improve your sentence formation along with ideas.However,you have great vocabulary . 🙂
1 novembre 2020
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Naramon Soimukda
Competenze linguistiche
Inglese, Tedesco, Tailandese
Lingua di apprendimento
Inglese, Tedesco
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