Naomi
I'm suffering from acne these days. I went to Dermatology and got medicine. I've been using this medical lotion for two weeks and it seems a little bit better. But my acne is like healed one acne but another acne shows up in another place. I wish I had clean skin so that I could have more confidence.
3 gen 2024 02:05
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I'm suffering from acne these days. I went to Dermatology and got medicine. ("I went to the/a dermatologist, I went to my dermatologist" might make it sound a little more natural-sounding) I've been using this medical lotion for two weeks and it seems a little bit better, but my acne is like healed one acne but another acne shows up in another place. (", but whenever one spot heals, another one shows up somewhere else" = just changing the sentence to make it sound a little more natural and understandable. The "acne is like healed one acne" needs to be structured a bit better.) I wish I had clean skin so that I could have more confidence.
Great job, Naomi! Overall, everything was good, but just needed a little adjustment in a couple spots. As for your skin issue, don't worry. It'll eventually get better. :) If you have any questions, please let me know!
7 gennaio 2024
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