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Nicole
I want to correct this sentence
"The table illustrates that entertainment of people who range from 30 to 50 years old differs widely from countries." How can i correct this sentence? Thx
12 nov 2011 13:45
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"The table illustrates that entertainment of people who range from 30 to 50 years old differs widely between countries."
12 novembre 2011
The table illustrates that the way people between the ages of 30 and 50 entertain themselves differs widely from country to country.
The sentence is a bit weildy though.
13 novembre 2011
I agree with Randy's comments. But, while Randy's sentence is fine, I personally would have added another word to the original sentence to be totally clear. "That entertainment of people......differs widely between countries." I would have said either "entertainment choices of" or "entertainment preferences of". Just a personal preference though.
12 novembre 2011
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Nicole
Competenze linguistiche
Cinese (mandarino), Inglese
Lingua di apprendimento
Inglese
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