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My name is Olesya. I live in Pskov. This is one of the most ancient
russian cities. Pskovites love their city and pride its great history. In 2003
we had celebrated Pskov's 1100th anniversary. But in spite of age Pskov
is a very beautiful city. Here are a lot of churches, which are made in
unique style. One-dome churches, isolated bell towers, interesting church's
porches, belfries on slopes of church's roofs... All that are typical features
of Pskov's architecture. Our most famous temple is the Trinity Cathedral. It
locates so lucky, that very many points have splendid view of the
Cathedral. This is a real pearl of Pskov's land and the city's trademark.

Pskov locates in the northwest of Russia about 20 kilometers east from
the Estonian border. It's a bridge from Russia towards Europe and a
convenient tourist center. Foreign tourists visit Pskov with great pleasure,
especially in summertime, when the city is just buried in verdure. A lot of
parks and public gardens beautify Pskov, gives waking places and clean
air. But June is a peculiar month here. The matter is that there is very
many poplars in Pskov. And when poplar seed tufts begin to fly, it seems
that snow is falling. All around become white. It's unforgettable!
I want to say, that for me Pskov is very romantic place. 13 years ago I had met my love here. Now he is my husband. And we are still happy together.

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Please, chek this little text (I must give it in 3 hours...)
  My name is Olesya. I live in Pskov. This is one of the most ancient 
russian cities. Pskovites love their city and pride its great history. In 2003 
we had celebrated Pskov's 1100th anniversary. But in spite of age Pskov 
is a very beautiful city. Here are a lot of churches, which are made in 
unique style. One-dome churches, isolated bell towers, interesting church's 
porches, belfries on slopes of church's roofs... All that are typical features 
of Pskov's architecture. Our most famous temple is the Trinity Cathedral. It 
locates so lucky, that very many points have splendid view of the 
Cathedral. This is a real pearl of Pskov's land and the city's trademark.

  Pskov locates in the northwest of Russia about 20 kilometers east from 
the Estonian border. It's a bridge from Russia towards Europe and a 
convenient tourist center. Foreign tourists visit Pskov with great pleasure, 
especially in summertime, when the city is just buried in verdure. A lot of 
parks and public gardens beautify Pskov, gives waking places and clean 
air. But June is a peculiar month here. The matter is that there is very 
many poplars in Pskov. And when poplar seed tufts begin to fly, it seems 
that snow is falling. All around become white. It's unforgettable!
 I want to say, that for me Pskov is very romantic place. 13 years ago I had met my love here. Now he is my husband. And we are still happy together.

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All is Ok. I know my variant very well... and when I read Nikita's variant, I see all differences at once.
I thank Nikita for quick answer very much!

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I realise you're on a time limit, but you would get clearer corrections in the Notepad section.  Sorry, but I still see basic mistakes in the corrections already given.  Rewriting your essay isn't much help to you if you're just going to submit it without being aware of how the corrections work.

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My name is Olesya. I live in Pskov. This is one of the most ancient
Russian cities. Pskovites love their city and proud of its great history. In 2003
we celebrated Pskov's 1100th anniversary. But despite the age Pskov
is a very beautiful city. There are a lot of churches built in
unique (add details, what style used exactly) style: one-dome churches, isolated bell towers, interesting (replace) church porches, belfries on slopes of church roofs... All that are typical architectural featuresof Pskov. Our most famous temple is the Trinity Cathedral. It
is located quite handy  so there are a lot of good points to enjoy the Cathedral's view. This is a true pearl of Pskov land and the city trademark as well.
Pskov is located in the northwest part of Russia,  about 20 kilometers to the east of the Estonian border. It's a bridge from Russia to Europe and a
convenient touristic center. Foreign tourists visit Pskov with a great pleasure,
especially in summertime, when the city is smothered in green. A lot of
parks and public gardens beautify Pskov and give waking (?) places and clean
air. But June is especially peculiar month in summer. The reason is that there are lots of poplars in Pskov. And when poplar wool starts to fly, it seems that it snows. All around become white and it's unforgettable!

Summing up, Pskov for me is a very romantic place. 13 years ago I met my love here. Now he is my husband. And we are still happy together.

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On my way to Pskov :)

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we celebrated Pskov's 1100th anniversary; an unique style; have a splendid view; in the summertime; there are much many poplars in Pskov; 
A lot of parks and public gardens beautify Pskov and gives waking places and clean air.
there are very many poplars in Pskov.
that for me Pskov is a very romantic place.

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