(Writing novel)Could someone check this short paragraph of the German letter (less than 100 words)?
I'm writing a novel (Buildingroman, like Hermann Hesse) based on Germany and Zürich in 19 century in Mandarin Chinese.
I haven't touched German frequently for two months(during summer vacation). So I was wondering if someone could check this paragraph if it is grammatically correct. Danke!
Lieber Friedlich,
Wenn du diesen Brief zu sehen, das bedeutet du wieder zu Haus bist. Ich weiß nicht und habe keine Erwatung, wenn du zurückkomen wird, aber ich denke es, wenn du pleite bist oder hilflos. Das ist ganz egal, wie denkst du über es, hier ist das Haus, und das bewegen wird nicht. Ich habe etwas Nachtrichten über dich von meine Freunden in Zürich gehört. Du hast dein Leben, und ich habe keine Rechte zu stören. Das sit deine Wahl. Das geld ist für deine nächste Entscheidung, es macht michts wie du es verwenden möchtest. Aber es ist das lezte Geld ich dir schenke.
VaterThe original meaning in English is:
"Dear Friedlich,
when you see this letter, means you’re at home again. I don’t know and have no expectation when will you return, but I think it’s when you’re broken and need helps. No matter how do you think, home’s here, won’t move. I’ve heard some news about you from my friends in Zurich. You got your life, and I have no rights to bother. That’s your choice. The money is for you for the next following decision, no matter how do you plan to use it. But it’s the last fortune I give to you.
Father.The original meaning in English is:
"Dear Friedlich,
when you see this letter, means you’re at home again. I don’t know and have no expectation when will you return, but I think it’s when you’re broken and need helps. No matter how do you think, home’s here, won’t move. I’ve heard some news about you from my friends in Zurich. You got your life, and I have no rights to bother. That’s your choice. The money is for you for the next following decision, no matter how do you plan to use it. But it’s the last fortune I give to you.
Father.
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Danke! I've made one!
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Du solltest dies im Notizbuch einstellen, dann kann man besser korrigieren.
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