I am writting CV in English, Please hepl me to check grammar
 Participation in the campaign of non-governmental organizations such as FHI Click tobacco smoking , HIV prevention campaign .
6/2007-6/2009
▪ Chairman of the club 's PR Hanoi Open University .
 To organize recreation programs and recreation for students of warehouse
 Organization of PR courses with the guidance of teaching staff and successful PR professionals to increase understanding for the club members .
 Participation in union activities , student council . Organize gameshow , cultural program for students ... at the request of the department and institution , in accordance with criteria and preferences of students.
 Do MC host for events of Sciences .
2/2009-11/2009
▪ Event Staff for media companies , advertisers Blue , Vietpower .
 Participation in the event under the direction of leaders ( 365 mobi program ... ) .
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I think you did good, you're using very high level vocabulary!  I assume these are your accomplishments.  I can only assume that I am fixing this correctly, of this helps.

 (I) Participated in non-governmental organization campaigns from 6/2007 to 6/2009 such as FHI ((this is a name?)), Click ((this is a name?))  a campaign to quit smoking cigarettes, and an HIV prevention campaign .

▪(I) Was the Chairman of the PR club at Hanoi Open University .
(I) Organized recreational programs and activities for students of the warehouse ((is it a warehouse?))
 (I) Organized of PR courses with the guidance of teaching staff and successful PR professionals in order to increase the club members' understanding.
(I) Participated in union activities and the student council. Also, at the request of the department and institution, and in accordance with the students' preferences and criteria, I organized game shows ((or a game show)) and cultural programs ((or a cultural program)) for the students ... 
 (I) Was an MC host for Science events. (2/2009-11/2009)
▪ Was an Event Staff member for the media advertising companies Blue and Vietpower .
 (I) Under the direction of leaders, participated in the 365 Mobi Program .

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