Could you check the grammar? The first picture was taken when I was 15 years old. The second one was taken by my friend yesterday. Although about 7 years have passed, I've not changed… I still love t

Miku

Could you check the grammar? The first picture was taken when I was 15 years old. The second one was taken by my friend yesterday. Although about 7 years have passed, I've not changed… I still love the french horn! It'll never change.

23 apr 2014 04:00

Risposte · 5

The "French" in "French horn" should be capitalized. Also, what will never change—the horn or you? If it is the horn, then your "it'll" is fine, but if it is you then the pronoun should be "I'll." Otherwise, fine.

23 aprile 2014

I agree with Brad, but would suggest you could change 'It'll never change' to 'That'll never change' then the reference to you loving the French horn will be more clear, as 'that' will refer to your emotional state.

23 aprile 2014

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