Lanna7
Do these sentences have any sense? 1-The deployment to war separated them from each other. 2-Nowadays you have to be beautiful and preferably with a beautiful voice in addition.” 3-follow me on the lyric. (if you are singing and want everybody follow you) 4-From this point of the song on it´s required a soprano voice. 5-Everyone had noticed the deep and restless impression in which he was himself. Thank you all :) :) :)
20 ott 2014 21:24
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They all make sense except for number 5, but they need to be reworded a bit. 1) The deployment separated them from each other. 2) Nowadays, you have to be beautiful; preferably, with a good voice too. 3) Sing with me (this sounds better than "follow me") 4) From this point of the song on, a soprano voice is required. And I don't understand what you're trying to say in number 5. I hope that helped! :)
20 ottobre 2014
Instead of, "Do these sentences have any sense?" Say, "Do these sentences make any sense?"
20 ottobre 2014
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