Please correct my sentences, Thanks.
1 - I was going to eat my dinner, but they called me from the hospital and asked me to come immediately, there was an emergency case.
2 - The cop would catch the thief, but a fast car hit him.
3 - They were to leave, but the rain was so heavy outside.
4 - Nora and Sam were going to get married last year, but the stupid man cheated her with her friend.
5 - Were you going to rent this apartment last week ? If yes, then you lost your chance. The apartment has been rented this morning.
6 - I will been have sleeping for 2 hours, when you are at home.
7 - I think your health will be more better before the school starts, because you will have been taking this new medicine for whole month.
8 - Peter is going to have been working for 4 months in his new job, by the time his birthday comes.
9 - My father will have been leaving from 2 hours, before his plane takes off. Don't worry, he will not miss the plane.10 - I asked Sally to stay with her grandmother at home, because we will have been having dinner outside when she wakes up.
Please correct my sentences, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ).
May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ?
Thanks in advance.
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Risposte · 9
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There are many ways to make these sentences sound better depending on what you are trying to say.
1 - I was going/about/trying to eat my dinner, but they called me from the hospital and asked me to come immediately, there was an emergency.
2 - The cop was trying to catch the thief, but a fast car hit him.
3 - They were about/going to leave, but the rain was so heavy outside.
4 - Nora and Sam were going to get married last year, but the stupid man cheated on her with her friend.
5 - Were you going to rent this apartment next week? If yes, then you have lost your chance. The apartment has been rented out this morning.
6 - I will been have sleeping for 2 hours by the time you get home.
7 - I think your health will be better before school starts, because you will have been taking this new medicine for whole month.
8 - By the time his birthday comes Peter will have been at his new job for 4 months.
9 - My father will be leaving 2 hours before his plane takes off. Don't worry, he will not miss the plane.
Additional Details:
10 - I asked Sally to stay with her grandmother at home because we will be having dinner outside when she wakes up.
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But trust me I have written many notebook entries before, without getting any help.
Anyway, Thanks again.
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Thanks Susan612 for the advice.
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Because you have many sentences, it would be easier to correct if you put this in the notebook section.
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