1)他喜欢看书躺在床上,眼睛越来越不好了。
==>if the above sentence change to this one
ex: 他寫歡看書"並且"躺在床上 , "所以"眼睛越來越不好了。
2)他喜欢躺"在"床上看书, "所以"眼睛越来越不好了。==>"著" change to "在"
3)他喜欢在床上躺着看书, "所以"眼睛越来越不好了。(right)
I hope to add all the sentences with "所以" behind the "," . it represent the result .
Actually ,(3) is right .
If you talk to Chinese people (1) ,(2) and (3) , they can still understand what you mean.
I hope that can help you in Chinese .