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FOUR SENTENCES Can you explain my mistakes thanks for help However, some people argue that life consists of more important things than health. They are sure that a lot of money, fame and a successful career may provide a happy life even if you are sick. I consider that health is the key to happy life. the consuequences of any serious diseases can affect on your futire
25 apr 2015 13:48
Risposte · 1
Two fixes: "...the key to a happy life." "...can affect your future." (You confused "affect" with another word. Also, check the spelling for consequence.)
25 aprile 2015
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