Ça vous dérange? It disturbs you?
I'm not a French native speaker, but I know French very well. It disturbs you if I correct your French paragraphs?

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Ça vous dérange?  It disturbs you?
I'm not a French native speaker,  but I know French very well. It disturbs you if I correct your French paragraphs?

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I agree with Martine. The correct translation of 'Ça vous dérange?' in this context is

'Do you mind if I ...?'

'Disturb' is not the right word to use here.

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DO YOU MIND IF ....?

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DO YOU MIND IF ........

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Does it disturb you if I correct your french paragraphs?

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Do I bother you if I correct your French paragraphs?