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kodachi
give your thoughts on this poem I wrote
The sky was shaking.........
with my sight focused on the ground
insecurity was reigning (or raining)
I lifted up my eyes,
and reality was found
just a small puddle in my life
16 set 2008 13:08
Risposte · 3
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Great.
16 settembre 2008
good theme，
if the order of some words changed， then how ...
17 settembre 2008
Good! write some more.. But this time include the word darkness.. Or sorrow.. Thanks
16 settembre 2008
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kodachi
Competenze linguistiche
Olandese, Inglese, Giapponese, Altro, Papiamento, Spagnolo
Lingua di apprendimento
Giapponese
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