Can someone fix this sentence please?
I really hate your stories about your life, because it makes me think that my life sucks.
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It doesn't need to be fixed. It is colloquial language but grammatical.
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I really hate the stories about your life, they make me feel like my life sucks.
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I really hate your life's stories which make me think mine sucks.
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Thanks. So, the final version is 'I really hate hearing the stories about your life because they make me feel like my own life sucks'...
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Grammatically, it is incorrect.
There should not be a comma after "life."
You could edit this sentence to make it sound "better." But its not necessarily needed.
"because" is a transition word and in your case, you do not need a comma.
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