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Marginalised through bullying that they received .does it sound ok?
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This contributes to the marginalization of students through the bullying that they received regarding with their non- branded clothing.
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9 nov 2016 23:05
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"through bullying that they received" sounds a bit weird, because bullying is not so much something you receive as it is something that is done to you. And also you can't have "regarding with," it is just "regarding." (received regarding their non- branded clothing)
Perhaps "This contributes to the marginalization of students who were bullied due to their non- branded clothing" sounds better.
9 novembre 2016
I would say: This contributes to the marginalization of students by the bullying they received because of their non- branded clothing.
9 novembre 2016
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