Hello, Is the text below okay? Greeting from Brazil!
One-day John was doing his assignment using the library’s book. However, his friends arrived and told him that it was old school and he should use a computer in order to find more information about his project and to type it at last. That was hard to John done away with books. He was passionate about making research using books. After that day John decided to sign up for some classes in order to get the hang of researching and typing. Therefore, after some classes, he realized that working and studying using the computer was his life calling.
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Hello Pedro. It will be easier to make changes if you submit it as a text that allows correction. If you do that, I can make a few suggestions.
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One-day John was doing his assignment using a library book. However, his friends arrived and told him that it was old school and he should use a computer in order to find more information about his project. It was hard for John to do away with books. He was passionate about doing research using books. After that day John decided to sign up for some classes in order to get the hang of researching and typing. Therefore, after some classes, he realized that working and studying using the computer was his life calling.
it is "a library book" or "the library books" or "the library's book"
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