Anna
Day 3/100 I cannot post my paragraph on italki yesterday, I was told that I’m posting too frequently, but posting once a day seems not very frequent, that makes me confused. After reaching the supportive team, I know that a newly registered user can only have 3 posts in 7 days, but I cannot find this stipulation on myself. It’s a little obstacle for me to get familiar with this website. This paragraph is about 70-80 words, but I think it’s enough, because I’ve written many words when I contact the support team 😊 And maybe I can post my exercise for yesterday below. Day 2/100 It’s the second day of my “100 words in 100 days” challenge, and it’s also the third day of the holiday of National Day. People escape from their schools or companies, and fly everywhere to enjoy their vacation. My friends take photos with lake, sky, grass, malls, theatres and historical buildings, and post them on the social media. The first three days of October is sunny, the sunshine and blue sky makes every photo seems great. But actually the weather is not that pleasant: it’37℃ outside, that’s terribly hot for anyone. However, according to the weather forecast, the temperature would drop quickly in the next days, it would be only 18℃ two days later. In 2022 the weather of the Earth seems so extreme, I’m worried about it.
4 ott 2022 12:17
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Day 3/100 I could not post my paragraph on italki yesterday. I was told that I’m posting too frequently, but posting once a day doesn't seem very frequent: that makes me confused. After reaching out to the supportive team, I now know that a newly registered user can only have 3 posts in 7 days, but I cannot impose this stipulation on myself. It’s a little obstacle for me to get familiar with this website. This paragraph is about 70-80 words, but I think it’s enough, because I’ve written many words when contacting the support team 😊 And maybe I can post my exercise for yesterday below. Day 2/100 It’s the second day of my “100 words in 100 days” challenge; and it’s also the third day of the holiday of National Day. People escape from their schools or companies and fly everywhere to enjoy their vacation. My friends take photos with lakes, skies, greenery, malls, theatres and historical buildings and post them on social media. The first three days of October has been sunny; the sunshine and blue sky making every photo seem great. But actually, the weather is not that pleasant: it’s 37℃ outside! That’s terribly hot for anyone. However, according to the weather forecast, the temperature will drop quickly in the next few days - it will be only 18℃ two days from now. In 2022, Earth's weather seems so extreme. I’m worried about it.
Get into the habit of ending sentences with full stop. Building paragraphs to organise the text into sections and lose all those spare commas. Apart from that - Brilliant! Oh, and join a pressure group on climate action.
4 ottobre 2022
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