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I prefer different types of movies such as comedy and science fiction. Comedy movies tend to boost our moods, but science fiction movies just interesting to watch as somebody’s imagination. For instance I liked all series of Harry Potter.
Movies and TV programs are made up to fill our leisure times, and they must be cheerful or positive.
20 feb 2022 14:31
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I prefer different types of movies such as comedy and science fiction. Comedy
movies tend to boost our moods, but science fiction movies are ("are" needed to connect both ideas) just as ("as" needed when you compare things) interesting to
watch as if ("if" needed to specify this is a hypothetical/imaginary situation) in someone's (need preposition "in". "Somebody" still works and makes sense, but "someone" always sounds more natural.) imagination. For instance, I liked the series of Harry
Potter. Movies and TV programs are made (including "up" means that the movies and programs are not real in this situation) to fill our leisure times, and they
must be cheerful or positive.
Hi! Your writing was clear and I knew what you wanted to say. I made corrections to make it sound more natural. Good job!
20 febbraio 2022
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Hafiza
Competenze linguistiche
Azero, Inglese, Russo
Lingua di apprendimento
Inglese
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