Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie in my heart. The story is about a couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie because of

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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie in my heart. The story is about a couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie because of many reasons. For example, the director, actor and the actress are very famous, there are many interesting love scenes especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the ship together and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and meaningful for me.👍❤🎬

19 set 2020 14:06

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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movies in my heart. The story is about a couple of different social classes who fall in love on the way to aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie because of many reasons, for example, the director, actor, and actress are very famous. There are many interesting love scenes, especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment on the ship front, and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and meaningful to me.👍❤🎬 "in my heart" seems unnecessary in the first sentence.

19 settembre 2020

Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie(s) [from my heart]. The story is about a couple (from) [of] different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie (for) [because of] many reasons. For example, the director, actor and the actress are very famous, (and) there are many interesting love scenes(,) especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the ship together(.)[and] Also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and meaningful (to)[for] me.👍❤🎬 Changes in (), deletions in []. Lovely write-up on Titanic. It’s a wonderful movie, and I agree with you about “My heart will go on”. Such a good song!

19 settembre 2020

Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movies. The story is about a couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie due to many reasons. For example, the director, the actor and the actress are very famous; there are many interesting romantic scenes; especially, when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the ship together, and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and meaningful for me.👍❤🎬

Well written. Focus on parallelism.

19 settembre 2020