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I ate avocado for the first time yesterday. I thought I wanted to eat poki bowl, so I made it. I didn't want to put it in because I had never eaten avocado and hated it, but my mother wanted to put it in, so I put. I didn't like it, but didn't hate it, so I try to eat it from now on.
3 mag 2025 23:41
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I ate avocado for the first time yesterday. I wanted to eat a poke bowl, so I made one. At first, I didn’t want to add avocado because I had never tried it and thought I’d hate it. But my mother wanted to include it, so I did. I didn’t like it, but I didn’t hate it either, so I’ll try to eat it again from now on.
Alternative Version (More Natural / Fluent Style):
Yesterday, I tried avocado for the first time. I felt like eating a poke bowl, so I made one. I wasn’t sure about adding avocado since I’d never had it before and thought I wouldn’t like it. But my mom wanted to include it, so I gave it a try. I didn’t really like it, but I didn’t hate it either—so I’m going to try eating it more often.
Tip: Use “try + -ing” when talking about testing something (e.g. try eating it), and remember that “poke” (pronounced poh-kay) is often written with that spelling in English. Also, avoid repeating “want to” too often—try using alternatives like felt like or wasn’t sure about for variety and fluency.
13 maggio 2025
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