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Help me to proofread my abstract to be more academic
hi, dear friends, I am working on a dissertation and want to improve the 200 words abstract part of my writing. since it is written by personal, I would prefer to send the abstract by email or skype. I will be so appreciated if anyone can help me.
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How has information technology transformed firms’ evaluation of the global business environment?
Hi, I need to write an assignment about international business.
The question is "How has information technology transformed firms’ evaluation of the global business environment? Give at least two examples. Be aware that this question is asking not only about how IT may affect the assessment of the business environment, but also how IT may influence a firm’s strategic choices."
However, I'm not good at this, and I don't know much about the relationship between information technology and global business.
Could you give me a brief explanation about this question so that I know the correct direction to do research.
Thank you very much.
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what sources for finance are available for small medium sized companies
Hi, I'm a business student who currently is studying in the UK. I got an assignment about finance recently. The topic is " What sources for finance are available for small medium sized companies and explain why they sometimes face difficulties in raising finance. However, I guess maybe because of my poor english, I have no idea about the meaning of SOURCES FOR FINANCE. Does it mean where is the finance of SMEs from? The answer could be like it is from bank overdraft or shared capital? I'm just guessing. If you know about finance or something about my assignment, please help me.
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Anyone know about Education and Tesl
Hi, my friend is going to apply for higher education in the UK, especially Manchester Uni, Bristol Uni, Leeds Uni and Birmingham Uni. She wants to study Education or Tesl. However, both of us have no idea about these universities. Does anyone know about any information about these universities or these two majors in the UK? Please tell me as soon as possible. We will be very grateful.
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part 2 I want my writing to be academic
I seperate my essay into several parts and submit it to here since the words account is limited. plz help me to make the grammar accurate and more academic. I'm studying a pre-master course. So I wish my writing could be much more academic. thanks a lot.
One clear advantage of CCTV cameras is that CCTV cameras play a key effective role in decreasing the crime rate and the fear of offense . Gill and Sprigs (2005) states that since the activities are being monitored by CCTV cameras in every single moment, any movements of offenders can be identified easily through CCTV records. Consequently, CCTV cameras have a shock effect on crime as reported by the Scottish government in 2009. This means CCTV can make citizens feel safer and reduce the fear of crime greatly. According to a survey from Griffiths (2004) about the crime rate changes after the period of installing CCTV cameras, which take Gillingham as a case, it is claimed that CCTV cameras have a particular impact on motor vehicle thefts or other pre-mediated crimes. Among all crime types, shoplifting and theft of motor vehicle were the significant ones which were influenced by CCTV cameras, the crime rates declined 49% and 37% respectively(ibid). Therefore, CCTV cameras’ shock effect refrains individuals from crime, less people are willing to commit a crime by exposed themselves to surveillance cameras, which accomplish the goal of CCTV cameras as an approach of crime prevention.
Furthermore, CCTV cameras represent an attempt by police to improve their operational efficiency. Gill and Sprigs (2005) take the view that CCTV cameras maintain records into a database in case of legal cases, proving the record as effective evidences for police. Additionally, Clarkson (2009) maintains that over 76% of legal cases are solved with the help of CCTV records in the UK. Take the Boston bombing as an example, 2 bombs exploded during the Boston Marathon on April 15, 2013, causing 264 people injuries and left 3 people dead. 3 days later, FBI (2013) concludes that two men who behaved suspicious and could be the bombers in all likelihood by observing the CCTV footage unceasingly. This example clearly demonstrates that there is no denying that CCTV footage makes a significant breakthrough for police to handle cases and play an irreplaceable role in criminal investigations.
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HElP ME WITH MY ESSAY ABOUT CCTV cameras
I seperate my essay into several parts and submit it to here since the words account is limited. plz help me to make the grammar accurate and more academic. I'm studying a pre-master course. So I wish my writing could be much more academic. thanks a lot.
INTRODUCTION
For a long time, Closed circuit television (CCTV) cameras have been a controversial issue. The question of whether more CCTV cameras should be installed has been widely debated by both positive and negative opinions. It is generally known that CCTV cameras as the product of high technology and society have been utilised by most countries around the world. In current society, the amount of CCTV cameras keeps increasing as a result of its effective function which monitors and records images of what happened in specific place in real time (Harwood, 2008). However, among all the countries which install CCTV cameras as a security measure, Britain owns the largest number of CCTV Cameras (around 4.2 million) which is estimated that 1 person will be watched by 300 cameras in a single day on average(Cole, 2004). Since CCTV cameras are usually existed in both private location and public space, it can control every activities happened in time as play a vital key in crime prevention. Meanwhile, problems and doubts have been raised associated with the existence of CCTV cameras. This essay will argue that CCTV camera decreases crime rate for citizens, improve efficiency of handling cases for police and help business to manage effectively.
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personal statement
I wrote a personal statement. It requires quite short and simple which should be included 3 parts: why apply for this course( managment) , why i am suitable for it and what is it good for my career. plz help me to correct if there is any mistakes. thx
I am interested in Management because of many reasons. The management is a quite complicated and challenging project, but also very interesting for me. Throughout my university life in my specialism in Business English, I learned a variety of subjects such as marketing, office skills and accountancy. Hence, I could understand basic knowledge about business. Furthermore, in my university life, I used to learn the online shop operation process and began to practice. I knew every detail in trade clearly. However, it cannot be denied that I found something difficult that I can’t learn from my limited knowledge about business, which strengthened my faith in further studying about business.
In the case of work experience, in July, I got my first job as a course consultant at an IELTS Training School. This job not only requires enough patience and flexibility but also marketing and management. All experiences inspired my interest to business, made me have a good understanding of my professional courses and prepared for my future career, but it is not enough so I pursue advanced study.
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help me with my report.
I wrote a report about water provision in Egypt. my writing needs to be more academic.
but i cant sumbit it on the italki cause the word is limited.
anyone have time to help me improve it ? thanks a lot.
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Academic Writing Book
I'm learning academic writing now. I don't know how to write essays in a more formal way.
any book recommend about academic writing for foreigners?
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how to write this paragraph in an academic way?
I write a part of an introduction of blind date research. But i want it to be more academic. I dont know how to make it better. plz help me :)
"Marriage as a vital decision in the whole life always has hot issues.With the rapic development of network technology, people would like to chat on the internet rather than face to face. Moreover, people even don't have time to stop to date the other half because of the modern rush life. When people get old enough for marry, their parents are all worried abut the "marriage" issue. "
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