Would so plz correct the below text to sound more natural. grammar mistakes are intended too. They found that saffron tendency to increase the number of daughter corms instead of the weight of generated corms causes the use of organic and biological fertilizers in the early years after planting, rather than increasing the size of generated corms, mainly increases the number of daughter corms per unit area.

How can I make this title more scientific while it's yet impressive? This is the title of a scientific paper. I want it to be acceptable to native English editors and imply the importance of our findings to. So I'm not sure if there's a better structure to change with mine. And so I need your professional edit in here. "In the First Year: Mother-corm size Has a More Significant Effect on Flower and Corm Yield of Saffron (Crocus sativus) than Application of Organic Fertilizers"

How can I correct this sentence to imply a correct meaning? (specially the last part) The country's dependence on foreign sources of organic fertilizers can also lead to an increase in foreign currency exports from the country.

How can I make this pape acknowledgment sound acceptable to native English people? We gratefully acknowledge Mr. Jalaledin Sadeghi, MSc, the President of the Academic Center for Education, Culture and Research of Sothern Khorasan Province and Mr. Darab Yazdani, PhD, Head of the Department of Agriculture and Natural Resources of ACECR, as well as research section colleagues of ACECR in providing the necessary supports and facilities required for best perfoming this research.

I'm not sure if I can use "impressibility....from" in the context here. Is this term correct? I'm not sure if I can use "impressibility....from" in the context here Is this term correct? how can I make it better? "The importance of using big maternal corms is not limited to improving flower dry weight in the first year, but due to impressibility of doughter comrs' reserves from mother corms size, the yield of the coming years of saffron farm will also be affected by the size of the planted corms."

Does this sentence make sense? How could it be modified to be used in an academic paper? Similar results as flower dry weight were obtained when considering number of flowers, due to the high corrolation between these two traits.

How much is my english entry grammatically right and clear to natives? Corrections are appreciated. Evaluating the effect of organic fertilizers and mother corm size on improving saffron (Crocus sativus) yield and growth in the first year of planting Abstract Considering the high area under cultivation and low yield of saffron in Iran as the biggest producer of this medicinal plant, as well as restrictions on breeding this triploid plant, agricultural practices for improving saffron yield are considerable. Hence, in addition to mother-corm size (0 to 4 g as small, 4.1 to 8 g as medium and 8.1 to 12 g as big), the effects of different organic fertilizers on saffron yield improvement were also studied. Nutrient treatments were cow manure, humic acid (Humax® 95 – WSG), an organic-mineral-based emulsion (Omic®) plus its supplement (Shield®) and unfertilized control. According the results, mother-corm size factor significantly affected studied traits including stigma dry weight, flower dry weight, number of flowers, number of buds and bud dry weight, total number of corms and total weight of corms. The highest and lowest amount of mentioned traits were obtained in big- and small-sized corms, respectively. Stigma dry weight in big-sized corm treatment with 82.22 mg.m-2 was about 200 and 3.5 times bigger than small-sized (0.43 mg.m-2) and medium-sized (24.52 mg.m-2) corm treatments, respectively. These results testify the importance of avoiding corms less than 4 g and justify bearing the cost of providing big corms in saffron cultivation. Evaluating the main effect of nutrition factor revealed no significant impact on most studied traits. Comparing the slope of linear regression between stigma dry weight and corm size (in different levels of nutrition treatment) showed that the highest yield increasing happened in Omic treatment (12.91 mg in exchange for one unit of mother corm weight increasing) which was significantly higher than Humax (4.57 mg in exchange for one unit of mother corm weight increasing). These results clearly show that despite extreme effect of mother-corm size on yield and growth of saffron in the first year of saffron planting, using organic fertilizers may have some positive effects in the next coming years that need to be studied.

Does "incorporation into" here means "connecting to" or "becoming a part of=taking part in"? I now this text is a little bit scientific, but the meaning of the word "incorporation into" here is questioned. However, 17O2 labeling studies carried out on the mammalian β-carotenoid 15,15′-oxygen- ase gave only 50 % incorporation of 17O into each of the two aldehyde products which was assumed as a monooxygenase mechanism.

Does "incorporation into" here means "connecting to" or "becoming a part of=taking part in"? However, 17O2 labeling studies carried out on the mammalian β-carotenoid 15,15′-oxygen- ase gave only 50 % incorporation of 17O into each of the two aldehyde products which was assumed as a monooxygenase mechanism.