anyone could help me revise these sentences, thank you~ 1、They say that this year, this year, graduates find it the most difficult to land a job. 2、It just goes to show that a success story doesn’t happen to everyone, and the key point of success is not to be able to do the same things , but instead, to find the one which is suitable for the right person.

Anything wrong with these sentences, thank you. I confirmed with the bank, they said two transactions were successful, (first one: $100.90, second one:　$109.41) and my credit card has been preauthorized but not yet charged. Apparently, there is no problem with the first order($100.90), but something wrong with the second one（$109.40）. Can you do something to solve this problem? If you do nothing, the $109.41 will be frozen for 30 days.

grammar mistakes 1) I just so mad about people doubt my information without any acquaintance. 2) , don't be such assertive to anybody u don't know 3) you r so hilarious. cannot you see Im totally no interested of u and I was just trying to be nice to answer you. Thank you~

Anything wrong with the Grammatical tense After they realized how important the environment is, they did a series things to reduce pollution and recover the ecological balance. Thank you~

Certification Letter XX has been employed by XXX as a satellite operator since 2009, with a monthly salary of 5500. She will visit Poland from 13th Aug, 2013 to 1th Sep, 2013. We guarantee that she will abide by the laws and regulations during her tour and will come back to China on time. We will keep her position and she will continue to work in our company after she comes back. Any grammar mistakes in my sentences？　Thank you

anything grammar mistakes in his words? I would like to have some Chinese friends. I am a PhD student at US but currently am visiting Peking U now. Can we be some sort of friend. Actually I want to find a GF at China and bring her to Seattle~ BTW, I found u are a wonderful, lovely, quite and elegant!! This guy pretended that he is a English native speaker, and I think he is a totally liar according to his grammar mistakes.....

any mistakes in this sentence? I am curious about the reason why you prefer to type French rather than Japanese in this Japanese forum, because I remember that you were born in Japan, weren't you?

Scuba Diving I have been to Thailand to learn scuba diving. I went to Bangkok, Tao Dao. Honestly, I don't like Bangkok, because the taxi drivers are dishonest. I wanted to go to a famous restaurant and used google map to make sure that taxi drivers know exactly how to go to the right place. The first driver told me that he knew the restaurant, but actually they took me to a wrong place with a similar name. The second one did not know how to go there, and I found that we were far away from the destination on my GPS. The third one did not want to go there by meters, and cheated me I would spend more money if I asked him by meters. Finally, I found he is a totally liar. I don't like running the business like this way, but local people and white collars are friendly and kind hearted. In contrary with Bangkok, Tao dao is a peaceful and beautiful island. There are a lot of diving resorts and I will never forget the moment when I were under 20 meters of the ocean. Thanks for passion and profession of my instructor Tracy and assistant Elaine.

the difference between 'invest' in and 'invest on.' I am confused about how to make a choice between these two phrases. Ex:He's rolling out what amounts to a new "New Deal" to 【invest in】 infrastructure. 　　 　　Others are a sinkhole for their rich owners, who often 【invest on】 the basis of prestige and passion, not to turn a profit.