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carta de motivaciòn Estimado señor, Chupa Chups, reconocida por sus dulces me interesa. Después de leer vuestro anuncio, he valorado mi experiencia de dos años en el área de ventas y marketing, considero que soy la persona adecuada para este puesto. Durante los dos años en el mundo del trabajo, estuve entre los mejores vendedores ya que tengo una formación en técnicas de ventas y màrketing que les ayudaran a aumentar las ventas. Mi experiencia en la empresa “Haribo” fue provechosa en la medida en que conozco el mercado francés y las expectativas de los clientes. Trabajé con los grandes clientes franceses como “Carrefour”, “Auchan”, “Leclerc”, y muchos otros. También, el francés es mi lengua materna, así no tengo problema de comunicación con los clientes. La posibilidad de ver el mundo de las golosinas permite ser entusiasta ya que es un mundo mágico. Además, creo realmente en la calidad de los productos de Chupa Chups y me gustaría mucho repetir lo que he cumplido en la empresa “Haribo”. Tener flexibilidad para poder vernos cuando usted lo considere más conveniente. Atentamente, Gracias a todos que atentan ayudarme para corregir mi carta de motivaciòn =)
6 aprile 2013
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work placement Hello everybody ! I had a traineeship during one month, and i decided to write it, can you help me to correct please ? =) Hello, I’m Cassandra, I did my training period as Assistant Manager in a company called “La Cave Lyon” located 132 rue bataille at Lyon 8. This company proposes a service, it stocks the wines. In fact, it exist only one site so it hasn’t subsidiaries. The Chief executive officer is Mister Gangneux who is also my supervisor. Moreover he is alone in this company, he hasn’t employees. Concerning the description of the distribution of the employees, M.Gangneux is in charge of all the departments (logistic, commercial,…). He works only with persons from Lyon, it’s a little company, and the concept don’t allow to work with another country. Besides, there aren’t competitors. As far as I’m concerned, the company is special because it is single on the market, and this concept to keep wines hasn’t be exploited. It works with suppliers like DHL, society of transport, which sells also boxes to send wines. Customers are either individuals or professional who want stock their wines in the better conditions with good temperature and humidity. The day were short since I work to 11am to 13 pm and to 14pm to 17pm. The first day, I’m felt anxious and stressed, because I had fear don’t succeed what he would ask me. I had various tasks as make cardboard boxes, prospecting, customer management, storing wines,… I managed to convert one prospect like customer. However, I had any problems. Indeed, when I went meet prospects I had to take my car and it was difficult to find parking. As well, working conditions are very hard because of the temperature which was between 5° and 10°. We were 2 in the company, therefore the communication was easy and the relationship between us was great. We went at the restaurant together. I’m feeling very well during my traineeship thanks to my mentor who helped me to learn the job and because I have a say in decision-making. Eventually, I’m very proud on account of I improved my oral fluency and because I found one customer for the company, hence I felt very useful. For my future prospects, this work placement offers me the chance to gain valuable experience, it’s useful at any point during my studies and the more undertake the more skills me will acquire. I can weigh up the pros and cons and consider whether that job is for me. Thanks ;)
17 febbraio 2013
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Missing Hi all ! If somebody can correct my entry please :) An English teacher in the university institute of technology of Lyon 1 was reported missing since two days. The police, teachers and students are in her research. Cassandra Philibert is on live from Lyon. Yes Fanta I am in the university institute of technology of Lyon where the teacher disappeared from now on two days. All her colleagues and her students rallied with the police for researches. Sylvie a student of Juliette Griffon wanted to express us her sadness. I am really sad to learn this news. For me she is necessary in this establishment. It clears that we can’t continue lessons without her. I am sorry but it is too much emotion for me. As Sylvie all her students are sad by this disappearing. I will give you information if we find Juliette Griffon. Last minute information: we have just learnt that Juliette Griffon, the English teacher has just been found. Cassandra Philibert is on live with us. Yes, Fanta they have found Juliette Griffon, it is necessary to say that everybody panicked but she was simply in this room 208. I am with her at the moment. Juliette, have you explanation to give us on what took place? I know it's long but it's important for me. Thanks to give me time to read this entry :)
2 dicembre 2012
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Report Hello ! If somebody can help me to correct this report created by me please :) Acts of violence clashed burst between army and rebels in democratic republic of Congo. The rebels ask for the departure of the president Joseph Kabila. Our special correspondent Kate Houston went on place. Yes, the rebels gain ground and continue advancing. They have already taken two cities and head for the capital to take power. The terrorized population flees in the neighbouring countries. As you know the Mayas have announced the end of the word on the 21 December 2012. Cassandra Philibert went on place. Indeed, I’m in Bugarach where this event has become the priority of the population. Since 2011, everybody contribute to build a bunker in order to survive. Sylvie is here to give us more information about it. Yeah. I think this event isn’t a joke. Bad weather, the crisis in Europe, tsunami make me think back to 2012 doomsday. I have already sold my house and I’m going to supermarket to buy food. Portugal was hit by a whirlwind this weekend causing a lot of damage. Our special correspondent Kelly Parker went immediately on place to determine damage. Yes Fanta I am in place which was the most affected by this whirlwind. As you can see behind me, everything was destroyed. There was a lot of materiel damage estimated at more than 5 million euro. Please help me and thanks :)
2 dicembre 2012
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un proyecto Hola a todos ! Si podéis ayudar me para corregir esté proyecto por favor ! Buenos tardes y bienvenido a esta conferencia sobre nuestro proyecto de empresa. Soy Cassandra Philibert es para mi un placer presentar al lado de mi, mi compañera. ¿Me oyes bien? Hemos seleccionado una empresa que creo gafas. En efecto este mercado anda boyante a causa del desarrollo de las nuevas tecnológicas que generan problemas de vista. ¿Quién no ha soñado mirar discretamente una persona que encuentras guapo o guapa? ¿Quién no ha querido ver la lamina de su compañero de clase? Para dar respuesta a el mercado que esta prosperando, hemos creado una empresa que va a producir gafa por ciento noventa y nueve euros (199€). Nuestro producto es gafas que amplia en campo de visión y que permiten ver mirar las películas en tres dimensión. Es posible cambiar las monturas. Existen diferentes colores como rojo, azul, rosa, verde, negro y blanco. Si queréis podéis mezclar do colores. El producto que proponemos estuviera fabricado en Francia entonces será un producto de cualidad. Una des nuestras valores es la cualidad porque es muy importante para la gente. Es por eso que nuestro producto es más caro. El público que va a consumir nuestro producto es las jóvenes a partir de quince años para el tres dimensión y las personas que tienen dificultados para ver. Algunos piensan que las lentillas pueden responder a un problema de visión mientras que muchas investigaciones han demostrado que deterioran la visión. Si tienen ustedes algunas preguntas sobre el proyecto, la empresa,... Gracias ! :)
29 novembre 2012
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello ! I'm Cassandra, I live in France, and i'm here because I want to improve my english. However, I can help us if you want improve your french. I enjoy going out with my friend, film, computer, music, .... I hope discovering a lot of person here ! :)
10 novembre 2012
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