Can anyone help me correct this little story? I was once a playful boy,a typical B.T.O.(big time operator),squandered too much time on playing video games.When I was graduated from primary school,I have to take an entrance examination before I could go to junior school.Of course I failed in the exam.News came like a bolt from the blue.I only have two choices:go to the worst school at my hometown or drop out,And I wanted to drop out at that time,then my mother,a very wise woman,came to me and talked,"It's been done,and for better or worse,we can not change it now,but I'd like you to go to the worst school rather than drop out,you know,even in the worst school,we could still make a difference and do some changes.

Are there any mistakes or ambiguities? It seems that changeable and unchangeable are paradoxes,just like success and failure.It's hard to divide them into two,actually,we should view them as a whole.

A question It is_____exciting news that all of us feel excited. A, so B, such C, so an D,such an' Which answer should I choose,why?

Is it correct? Heed what I say! Or you'll regret some day. Should we use "heeding" instead of "heed".

What does at the very begining mean?

Make an appointment A: Good day,I’d like to make an appointment with you please. What time and when can you see me? B: Well,I’d like to see you, but I am very busy this week. A: OK. What about next week,will you be available then? B: Yes, I will be availible then. What's time would suit you? A: Next Saturday evening. B: All right I have an opening at that time. I look forward to seeing you. A: Perfect! I will see you then.

Help me to correct it The company I am going to introduce is called Anta,a very famous shoes company in Quanzhou.Its products included shoes,clothing and so on.It is best known for its high quality shoes.This company was founded in 1993.(that is the year I was born,in other words,it has a 21 year history.) The creator of Anta is named Ding Shizhong.The company's slogan is called "Keep Moving".Anta's headquarters located in Quanzhou.Anta has more than six thousands employees.It annual turnover was run up to 76.2billion RMB last year.Just like other famous companies,Anta has its own unique features.The point I want to emphasize is Anta's spirits.Now let me explain the meaning of the sign.In Chinese,Anta means "steady and sure".You know,if you want to run a business successfully,the spirit of "steady and sure" is very necessary.You need to keep moving and start over again.By the way,in Greek,Anta has the same meaning too.Thank you for your listening.

Introduction of a company The company I am going to introduce is called Anta,a very famous shoes company in Quanzhou.Its products included shoes,clothing and so on.It is best known for its high quality shoes.This company was founded in 1993.(that is the year I was born,in other words,it has a 21 year history.) The creator of Anta is named Ding Shizhong.The company's slogan is called "Keep Moving".Anta's headquarters located in Quanzhou.Anta has more than six thousands employees.It annual turnover was run up to 76.2billion RMB last year.Just like other famous companies,Anta has its own unique features.The point I want to emphasize is Anta's spirits.Now let me explain the meaning of the sign.In Chinese,Anta means "steady and sure".You know,if you want to run a business successfully,the spirit of "steady and sure" is very necessary.You need to keep moving and start over again.By the way,in Greek,Anta has the same meaning too.Thank you for your listening.

Are there any errors? And talking about my family.There are five people in my family.My mother,father,my wife and my daughter.She is five years old now and she is very pretty.All in all,I have a happy family.