Education is the only key factor in developing country. Do you agree or disagree? In modern life, it is very necessary for people to improve their educational level to follow the rapid development throughout the wolrd in various aspects such ad science, technology and economy. From my point of view, it is clear that education is considered one of the most significant figures to contribute to the advancement of developing contries nowadays on the following grounds. Firstly, we cannot deny that increasing education level is the first priority in national strategies since education is the primary element to make an economy stronger as well as to save a fragile economy. Taking a look back in history, Japan have been a typical instance for years. People all around the world really admire the way that a country totally destroyed after World War II become among the largest economy by education supplement. Secondly, education help people improve their consciousness which plays an important role in building a better society. Along with criminal problem, other factors including health or infrastructure depend too much on educational level. More and more recent studies show that the crime rates in many developed nations which build strong educational system are far lower than those in developing countries whose education system are still poor. This help strengthen the most importance of education in a country. Last but not least, today keeping up to date with the newly rapid advancement of technology and science requires human to have certain educational level. It is easier to access the world if we reach rather high level of education background. We just can broaden our mind and increase knowledge by educated. For example, in our country, government has policies to push up nationally education level for years, as a result, more and more young talents have won many world awards in different fields ranging from agriculture to technology in recent decade. In conclusion, it cannot be denied that education is the most significant element in a developing country because it contribute to streghthen national economy, to improve the awareness of citizens in societies and to give the key to access worldwide advancement. (Please help me to correct it out, thanks !) :)

IELTS Task 1 - Describing chart - Please help me to correct if any mistakes! Topic: The table below give information on consumer spending on different items in five countries in 2002.(IELTS Cambridge 7 - Writing Task 1) The table indicates the variation of consumer spending on a series of items of three group: Food/Drinks/Tobacco, Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education in the five countries, namely, Ireland, Italy, Spain in 2002. Firstly, as we can see from the figures above that food, drinks and tobacco were in the most important position on consumer expenditure in all five of the five countries. To be detailed, the percentage of this kind of expenditure was around 30% in Turkey and Ireland while in other three countries, it was under 20%. Secondly, the group of clothing and footwear took the second significant slot. Especially, Italy consumer spending on clothing/footwear has the highest percentage with 9% while that of Sweden got the lowest percentage with 5.4%. Finally, expenditure on leisure and education is the least of all three group of items since the table shows that In Turkey, the percentage of consumer spending on leisure and education was highest with only 4.35%. In conclusion, the figures showed in the above table the divergency of consumer expenditure on various items. The percentage of spending on food, drinks and tobacco was highest whereas that on leisure and education was lowest.