help me in english some peoples need to be spaced...!! is it correct to say that i need to create spaces from some peoples. !!

My day Hie friends..i want to share about my day..with you all. TODAY it was my operating system's exam..i have studied for it..before but i had not revised for it..before my exam..and i have did it perfectly.My semester exams are heading in front of me so i want to do my best this time,but unfortunately i don't study according to the requirements.I want to focus on my studies ca you people suggest me some ways of concentrating in my studies.!! :)

HELP ME OUT so hows u..? Diwakar Gaur: I am good How about you? Tanu Goyal: m awesme.. wats d plan ths bday..? Nothing special yaar I'm working on my birthday Tanu Goyal: working..whot?nd why.? Diwakar Gaur: I am working with British airways I don't have an answer for why ! Tanu Goyal: ohk ohk..r u in mumbai..? Diwakar Gaur: I got an opportunity to work with worlds best airlines and I decided to work No because of my job I have to come back to vaishali Just one month back I came here Tanu Goyal: bdw wat is ur job..? Diwakar Gaur: I am reservations and ticketing department I'm quality analyst there Tanu Goyal: ohk..great..nd wat about ur education..? Diwakar Gaur: I am doing my honours in psychology Completed first year from Mumbai And now I hv to transfer to any of the universities in Delhi in second year Tanu Goyal: ohk..its wow yrr..u r earning..nd we are still studying..!!yuks..we jst get bored up carrying these books since childhood... Diwakar Gaur: It's okay You will also start earning someday Tanu Goyal: yes afcourse.. Diwakar Gaur: I know it's quite early to start but the package offered to me was too good to refuse Tanu Goyal: yaa...its awesome..u are having experience too.. Diwakar Gaur: That's true , experience counts Tanu Goyal: yeps.. Diwakar Gaur: We must meet some day for a coffee if you wish to Tanu Goyal: yaa..it will be so funn yarr..meeting ur old frns.. bt right now again my univ. xams are heading...in front of mee...so after xams for sure.. Diwakar Gaur: I can understand Tanu Goyal: i'll catch u fr a coffee.. Diwakar Gaur: That would be great Tanu Goyal: so..gunnite..its too late already.. n wish u a vry happie bday. again enjoy ur work... Diwakar Gaur: Thank you so very much Good night Nice talking to you Tanu Goyal: same here..

my first note from India Hello, friends am from India ,wanted to connect with people who speaks English as i wanted to improve my English speaking skills so i wanted to join all English speakers on italki.Please join me.I cant afford to hire any English teacher so i want to be friends with English speakers to help me out.Thankyou!! :)

please mark up my mistakes...in this convo.

 so hows u..?
Diwakar Gaur:
I am good
How about you?
Tanu Goyal:
m awesme.. wats d plan ths bday..?
Nothing special yaar
I'm working on my birthday
Tanu Goyal:
working..whot?nd why.?
Diwakar Gaur:
I am working with British airways
I don't have an answer for why !
Tanu Goyal:
ohk ohk..r u in mumbai..?
Diwakar Gaur:
I got an opportunity to work with worlds best airlines and I decided to work
No because of my job I have to come back to vaishali
Just one month back I came here
Tanu Goyal:
bdw wat is ur job..?
Diwakar Gaur:
I am reservations and ticketing department
I'm quality analyst there
Tanu Goyal:
ohk..great..nd wat about ur education..?
Diwakar Gaur:
I am doing my honours in psychology
Completed first year from Mumbai
And now I hv to transfer to any of the universities in Delhi in second year
Tanu Goyal:
ohk..its wow yrr..u r earning..nd we are still studying..!!yuks..we jst get bored up carrying these books since childhood...
Diwakar Gaur:
It's okay
You will also start earning someday
Tanu Goyal:
yes afcourse..
Diwakar Gaur:
I know it's quite early to start but the package offered to me was too good to refuse
Tanu Goyal:
yaa...its awesome..u are having experience too..
Diwakar Gaur:
That's true , experience counts
Tanu Goyal:
yeps..
Diwakar Gaur:
We must meet some day for a coffee if you wish to
Tanu Goyal:
yaa..it will be so funn yarr..meeting ur old frns..
bt right now again my univ. xams are heading...in front of mee...so after xams for sure..
Diwakar Gaur:
I can understand
Tanu Goyal:
i'll catch u fr a coffee..
Diwakar Gaur:
That would be great
Tanu Goyal:
so..gunnite..its too late already.. n wish u a vry happie bday. again enjoy ur work...
Diwakar Gaur:
Thank you so very much
Good night
Nice talking to you
Tanu Goyal:
same here..