Personal statement to apply in a University I have keen interest in technology and I am always involved with computers and things related to technology. So, I want to study Computer Engineering. I really like to develop things I would very much like to expand my skills further at university. For my work placement I worked with GIS (Geographic Information System) and also with database. This has improved my SQL skills and my logical thinking. I am little curious, so in my free time I really like to learn about new things by myself, I also like to play videogames, workout and watch movies. I am looking forward to studying and learn new programming languages and other incredible things at university. I am so optimistic about that.

Could someone correct my text please? Firstly, I am a person that only believes in stranger things if I see those things with my own eyes. Last week a weird thing happened to me and it scared me. Anyway, last week I was travelling with my girlfriend to Los Angeles, USA. We stayed in a hotel, and near this resort there was an lake. So, one of the days that I stayed there I decided to go walk alone, it was about 11pm, and while I was walking, I noticed some voices calling for my name, and I also heard a cracking noise, a sound similar to trees breaking. It was the first time in my life that I really felt fear, so I started to run back to the hotel. The next morning, I went there again, and something really creepy had happened, all the trees around the lake were destroyed and I also found some dead animals. I really don’t know what had happened, but it was really sinister.

Stranger Things Firstly, I am a person that just believe in stranger things if I see that things with my own eyes and last week a weird thing happened to me and it’s scared me. Anyway, last week I was travelling with my girlfriend to Los Angeles, USA. We stayed in a Hotel and near this resort there is an lake. So, one of the days that I stayed there I decided to go walk alone, it was about 11pm, and while I was walking, I noted some voices calling for my name, but I also heard a cracking noise, a sound similar to trees breaking. It was the first time in my life that I really felt fear, so I start to run to hotel back. In the next day in the morning, I went there again, and something really creepy was happened, all the trees around the lake were destroyed and I also found some dead animals. I really don’t know what was happened but it was really sinister.

Could someone correct my text please? Nuclear energy probably is the most powerful source of energy that we have knowledge, besides that it is cleaner. From my point of view this is not a good reason to use because we don’t have a second chance. First of all, like I have mentioned before, it’s a clean energy, it’s cleaner than oil, coal and gas, does not release greenhouse gases, It’s cheaper than the other source of energy, there are a lot of positive things. On the other hand, nuclear energy is extremely dangerous, any human mistake or technical failure can cause an huge catastrophe, if any accident happen we don’t have second chance. A great exemple is Chernobyl. In 1986 happened an nuclear accident in Pripyat, Ukraine and all the city was destroyed. Nowadays it’s a ghost city, because the radiation still present there and some experts says that we will need about 900 years to come back live there. Secondly, nuclear energy can be used like a weapon, the atomic bombs, that are extremely devastating. Like an exemple we have Hiroshima e Nagasaki, both were destroyed using atomic bombs. Lastly, there are better options than nuclear energy such as wind energy, solar energy or water energy, because they aren’t dangerous and unlimited. All things considered, nuclear energy is too dangerous, doesn’t worth it.

Could someone correct my text please? Nuclear energy probably is the most powerful source of energy that we have knowledge, besides that it is cleaner. From my point of view this is not a good reason to use because we don’t have a second chance. First of all, like I have mentioned before, it’s a clean energy, it’s cleaner than oil, coal and gas, does not release greenhouse gases, It’s cheaper than the other source of energy, there are a lot of positive things. On the other hand, nuclear energy is extremely dangerous, any human mistake or technical failure can cause an huge catastrophe, if any accident happen we don’t have second chance. A great exemple is Chernobyl. In 1986 happened an nuclear accident in Pripyat, Ukraine and all the city was destroyed. Nowadays it’s a ghost city, because the radiation still present there and some experts says that we will need about 900 years to come back live there. Secondly, nuclear energy can be used like a weapon, the atomic bombs, that are extremely devastating. Like an exemple we have Hiroshima e Nagasaki, both were destroyed using atomic bombs. Lastly, there are better options than nuclear energy such as wind energy, solar energy or water energy, because they aren’t dangerous and unlimited. All things considered, nuclear energy is too dangerous, doesn’t worth it.

Could someone correct my text please? Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you because I saw your post of a volunteer in a NGO in your website and I have interest. My name is Pedro, I am twenty one years old and I come from Brazil. I never had been abroad but I would like to have this new experience in my life. I study Computer Engineering and I am graduating in December this year and I want to use my technology skills to help you to develop projects that solve social problems. I can speak English and Portuguese fluently and a little bit of Spanish and French. I have a huge experience in volunteer work, in my country I worked in many areas. For example, I have worked in a NGO that helps kids to develop the logic and creativity skills for 2 years. Besides that last month I worked helping homeless people. I would like to know if in this job any specific experience is required. I would also like to ask about the accommodation for the programme. How does it work? I look forward to receiving your e-mail. Yours faithfully, Pedro Coelho

Could someone correct my text please? Dear Sir, I read your last article about graffiti artists. I'd like to share my point of view about it with other readers. To my mind, graffiti art is a good thing, usually they are colourful and amazing drawings, in my opinion they deserve more respect. Firstly, our city has a lot of buildings, a lot of things that transform the city in a cold city, we have a lot of visual pollution and something like graffiti art might transform the city in a happier city. Secondly, that artists need an appropriate places to expose their arts, they can't do it anywhere, they need some support from the government to produce it. If they have some permission to use a wall in a specific place everything will be better. Lastly, graffiti is art, all kind of art need support, art is good for our culture. All in all, I feel very strongly that graffiti artists deserve all kind of support, art galleries also might be a good place to the artists expose their arts, but the artists can't do this alone, they need some help, mainly from the government.

Graffiti Art Dear Sir, I read your last article about graffiti artists. I'd like to share my point of view about it with other readers. To my mind, graffiti art is a good thing, usually they are colourful and amazing drawings, in my opinion they deserve more respect. Firstly, our city has a lot of buildings, a lot of things that transform the city in a cold city, we have a lot of visual pollution and something like graffiti art might transform the city in a happier city. Secondly, that artists need an appropriate places to expose their arts, they can't do it anywhere, they need some support from the government to produce it. If they have some permission to use a wall in a specific place everything will be better. Lastly, graffiti is art, all kind of art need support, art is good for our culture. All in all, I feel very strongly that graffiti artists deserve all kind of support, art galleries also might be a good place to the artists expose their arts, but the artists can't do this alone, they need some help, mainly from the government. Yours faithfully, Pedro Coelho

Recipe In my opinion, Beefy parmigiana is the best thing. It’s made with beef or course, cheese, ham, oregano, salt, vinegar, garlic, breadcrumbs and eggs. First of all, season the beef with oregano, salt, vinegar and garlic. Then pass the beef on the breadcrumbs, next in the mixed eggs and after that on breadcrumbs again and fry the beef. Now the beefs are placed in refractory with some tomato sauce. Add a layer of cheese and ham on top of the beefs and add more tomato sauce. Finally bake for 30 minutes. Let stand for 10 minutes before serving. The Beefy parmigiana shoud be served with rice.