Wie kann man einen Sprichwort pragmatisch analysieren?

Ich kann Deutsch noch nicht sprechen.

Please check this German dialogue for me! I'm going to be presenting some students to the German language using a small dialogue, so they can see how it's written and hear how it is pronounced... To double check, I'm writing this hoping somebody can check it out for me and tell me if there are any mistakes. Vielen Dank! Hier ist es: Karl: Sag mal, wann hast du Geburtstag? Anja: Am vierten Dezember. Karl: Was wünscht du dir zum Geburtstag? Anja: Ich hätte gern neue Kleider oder eine schwarze Katze! Karl: Das ist süß! Und wo feierst du deinen Geburtstag? Anja: Wir machen ein klienes Fest im Garten. Karl: Ach, gut!

Hallo German learners! How could you make your German flow???

I'm at level B2 but still can't make correct sentences!!! :( I'm a perfectionist and it's so hard for me to just go ahead and talk talk talk in German!!! If I try... I'm ruining the Akk, Dat and Gen... u know what I mean! Wait, let's not talk about Articles and using them with prepositions :( Please I need some perfectionists to tell me how did they go through this.... I can't just ignore that & saying saying whatever and knowing my German sucks xD 

Vielen Dank! 

What's the difference between "Shy" & "Embarrassed"? I found a sentence in Agatha Cristie's Curtain "Her smile was shy and little embarrassed." I wonder if there's a difference between'em...

What's the diffrence between "within" & "inside"? I find'em so close but I'm not sure about the use of each one please give me some exemples.. Thanks =)

Africa... Today, I'd talk about Africa, you see people getting tortured because of wars, famine,thirst.. & no one really cares, the world looks unfair today, someone there's eating until full & throwing the rest in garbage & another is not finding pure water to drink! he's drinking from a water that's on the floor that's mixed with mud .. did you think about people that r waiting for the day they die & get rid of their painful life? We all see that kind of humains without humanity daily.. wait a second I may be one of them! I must take a look back, all what I did... Is everything alright? fine. I'm feeling so bad about the world today, "Famine", "Africa" I'm an African but white, I don't really suffer but I see how my brothers & sisters in the other countries r suffering, I got a dream to make money & help them, at least some of them... it really breaks my heart when I see a child that just came to life & didn't find what to eat or drink, even if they survived they won't find somewhere to study or get a chance to let their minds work, I believe if they could, Africa would be an amazing world to live in. Without thinking about other things, I may have a childish thoughts but I dunno why, my beliefs r strong & I hope we'r gonna make a step ahead... Hope so.