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Comparing two cities of Iran ------> Please help me to correct it Tehran is the capital of Iran and is located in the south of Alborz Mountains at the north of Iran. On the other hand, Qazvin is the capital of Calligraphy of Iran and is located in the north-west of Iran. Although Tehran and Qazvin are very different, they have a lot of similarities. While Tehran is full of the best state universities of Iran like Tehran University, Sharif University, Poly Technic, Iran University of Science and Technology, Tarbiat Modares University, Shahid Beheshti, Tehran University of Medical Science and so on, Qazvin just has two of them named Imam Khomeini International University and Qazvin University of Medical Science. Unlike Tehran, Qazvin has healthy climate and there is not any traffic problems. Tehran is very big and crowded city with a population of about 12 million people; in contrast, Qazvin is a town with the population of just about one million people. Qazvin has been the capital of Iran in the reign of Safavian and is full of monuments like Kolah Farangi, Hammame Ghajar, traditional Bazar and so on. Similarly Tehran has been the capital of Iran in the reigns of Zandian, Ghajarian, Pahlavi and for this reason is full of monuments. In conclusion, Qazvin and Tehran are two important cities of Iran and have a lot of similarities and differences. In my opinion, living in smaller cities like Qazvin is very beneficial because they have lower population, good weather and lower levels of stress. Best regards!
21 gennaio 2016
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Travel nightmare -----> Would you please correct my errors? (*:*) Travel nightmare is a difficult situations that make your vacation devastated and full of stress. I remember, when I was younger (at age of 20), I accepted in Shiraz University in electrical engineering at second semester. Until then, I hadn't traveled lonely, so I decided to try it. Then, I took a bus ticket to Shiraz without wasting time. After 14 hours, I reached to Shiraz and went to Shiraz University but unfortunately they said that they wouldn't register me until the next semester. That was very hard situation for me, because I was too young and couldn't stay in that unfamiliar city. I was very sad and upset, so without paying attention to the time and distance between Shiraz to Qazvin, I went to terminal at 10 AM. The Qazvin bus was going to leave Shiraz at 14 but I couldn't wait. I decided to get bored on a bus to Tehran and then go to Qazvin. In Isfahan I realized that I made a critical mistake because I would reach to Tehran at midnight. My fellow traveler was a religious person (Mullah) from Qom. He asked me why I was sad and after realizing that, he repeatedly told me that I would reach Tehran very soon and I had to chew the cud. I reached to Tehran and I had to stay at terminal until morning. In conclusion, after that event I understood that before doing any important work I should spend time to think about its consequences carefully!
18 gennaio 2016
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Difficulty sleeping Difficulty sleeping Sleeping is a process in which human's body recovers its energy. If people couldn't sleep very well, they would not have enough energy to do their routines, think very well etc. In my opinion, insomnia is one of the new problems of people who live in the progressive societies. Based on scientific contexts there are some solutions to overcome this problem. First, don't drink coffee or tea 2 hours before your bedtime; these beverages are full of caffeine which is a type of chemical substances that might disturb your sleeping. Second, don't go to bed until you will be sleepy. Some experiments shows that going to bed before bedtime, makes people bad sleeper. Third, try to get away stress from yourself; relax your body and think about good things and breathe deeply until falling asleep. Finally, try to exercise more and more; exercising will make your body tired and your soul free of stress, so you will fall asleep automatically. In addition make an exercise is very useful to your body.
29 novembre 2015
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Please help to correct my mistakes Hasan Omidzadeh, An Iranian Devoted Teacher He born on Tir 29th 1333 (in Persian calendar) in Gilan, Iran. He was teaching in one of the villages of Gilan, named Bijarsar. Onec upon a time, while he was teaching in his class, students’ screams attracted his attention. When he got out of his class he saw that heater of other class was firing and the students calling help. He went to the class as soon as possible to help students getting out of the class. While he was helping, the class door was closed and unfortunately he got stuck in the fire. He couldn’t get out because the class door didn’t have any handle. Our devoted teacher’s body was burning within the flames of fire and he couldn’t get out of the class until education officials came and carried him to a hospital by an ambulance. His sever injuries made him to go to operating room for 17 times. Unfortunately, after 15 years pain bearing, eventually he died on Tir 28th 1391; peace be upon him. The education officials changed the school’s name to Hasan Omidzadeh.
21 novembre 2015
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Happiness (*:*) What is the happiness? . . . . . . Happiness is a result of a fraction that its numerator is effort and its denominator is expectation ! . . . . . Albert Einstein ????????????????????
19 novembre 2015
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Who can help me???

I read a text in my english book as the following:

 

"She came to live in the Keller home."

 

Is it true?

 

Because I think that it should say Keller's home not Keller home!

 

Thanks

 

 

17 novembre 2015
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Questo contenuto viola le linee guida della Comunità.15 novembre 2015
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Questo contenuto viola le linee guida della Comunità.13 novembre 2015
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Would you please correct my mistakes? (*:*) While I was studying in middle school, one of my classmates was very witty person and skillful in application softwares such as the Office, the Photoshop etc. One day he brought an A4 paper that he had typed on it as the following: “Teachers entrancing to this class is prohibited” He had designed an arm and put it under the mentioned text. While he was showing his art to us, one of the rude students, that always was sitting on the last bench, came and caught it. He pasted that paper on the door of the class in fewer than 30 seconds. Immediately after pasting it on the door, my teacher came and saw the paper. Without wasting time, he took and showed it to the manager who was walking in the corridor. The manager came to the class and gave a chance to me and my classmates to present the person who had done such a bad behavior in less than 5 minutes. The time was passing quickly but anyone didn’t tell anything. Eventually the time finished and the manager sent one of the students to his office to bring his scissors. It was very difficult situation because in fewer than 30 minutes all the students would make bald by his scissors. Some students were frightened of results of telling the truth and the others wanted to prove their friendship to him. After finishing our time, the manager took his scissors and made all the students bald. It was awful and terrible; all the students from other classes were pointing us by their fingers and were laughing, when we were in the court of the school. After that I decided to tell the truth and run and never be silent when my interests are in danger. It was one of the most important lessons that life taught me.
13 novembre 2015
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Which one is correct?

What happened? or What did happen?

When does it happen? or When it happens?

Thank a million ... (*.*)

12 novembre 2015
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